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Open Poetry #20

Pledge of Dreams--Sonnet

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-04-15 12:52 PM

In dreams, I see us living life as one.
Forever joined by words from kindred souls.
Running here, 'neath a bright and brilliant sun,
Together 'cross this wide and grassy knoll.
Our hearts have met here in this place my love,
To be as one in eyes of life so true,
So pledge we now our lives to One above;
Your love pledged to me, and mine pledged to you.
These are the words that flow from hearts in time.
These hearts that felt that love would never be.
My heart is yours my love, as yours is mine,
As long as ears can hear and eyes can see.

This is the pledge I make to you this day.
That your heart with mine, ever love, will stay.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

1 posted 2002-04-15 12:56 PM

It is a beautiful dream is it not? I think your Juliett will just adore this! Nice sonnet!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-04-15 01:37 PM

Very nice style...James

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-04-15 01:39 PM

Romeo, I like this...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-15 03:04 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is so lovely, sweet friend, you are a true modern romeo with a golden heart! (big hugggsssss) I just know your Juliet will forever be honored to pledge her heart to yours, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

5 posted 2002-04-16 01:17 PM

Thank you all. My dreams are this close to coming true.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-04-17 12:57 PM

This is my sigh of the day! It's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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