Open Poetry #20 |
Feel What I See |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Feel What I See Images upturned of fallen rainbows Raging waters flooding my brows Passionate winds blowing upwards Towards an heaven of higher standards Broken hearts of lovers weeping Faded wings of butterflies dying Children lost in a paradise of disguise Frowning in innocent waves of shattered dreams Come by my soul, hear the sorrow Look into my eyes feel what I see Hold my trembling life from darkness' shadow Tell me that flowers will bloom tomorrow Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Daniel...Such a MAGNIFICENT POEM!!! The words like a breath of fresh air. ***Ivy Rose |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
see what my heart feels in this reach of friendship the gentle hold of your hand see beyond the sorrow to images grand walk with me to healing gardens smell the flowers in bloom look towards love and clear away the gloom hope you are ok..... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This is so moving. Daniel, the flowers will bloom tomorrow. I'm still waiting for mine to do the same but I know they will one day and yours will too. Sometimes it just takes longer then what we'd like. "sigh" kat |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Daniel, the flowers indeed will bloom again tomorrow.... such sorrow in this write. Hope you are well.... ~Warm Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ So very good to see you~ 'Tell me that flowers will bloom tomorrow' They will my friend ... they will~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is so very sad but powerful, sweet friend, I know with all my heart those flowers will bloom tomorrow and true joy and dreams are bound to come true for you! (smiles) Always believe in your heart and you can achieve anything, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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