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A Cool Moon
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A Cool Moon |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
 This is the night Of a cool, Moon...shivers Of blended light fall Like hail upon the unwary, Those who look for the unknown With eyes glazed over with dreaming. In the night of a cool, Moon, Passion is tucked into bed, Fires simmering on low. Ice melting over the Sun. Icy tears falling on hearts, Icy fingers touching souls. With the night of a cool, Moon... Shadows twirl with the light of day Becoming one twist of dark and light. A swelling tide of cooled-off lovers, An ice-dance of chilled love affairs, A cool-down of Lunar fantasies. Still...this cool, Moon sits on high Reigning over the passion-flower dreams Of the self-serving seekers of Love. ....so icy cool....so chilling ....so deeply frozen This night of the cool, cool, Moon. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ivy Rose, That is a cool poem! I mean it...I really like this write.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ivy, this is so beautiul yet so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all lovers who are left with the cold shoulder and I pray the moon can agins hine like a crystal and sparkle with true loves radiance! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love an dlight always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
In the night of a cool, Moon, Passion is tucked into bed, Fires simmering on low. Ice melting over the Sun. Icy tears falling on hearts, Icy fingers touching souls. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ivy Rose! WOW! Now this is my favorite! Of course each time I read one of yours I think the same thing to myself... But this..the images and emotions you have conjured up for us to savor ....well, I just love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, Agree With larry, a cool poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A swelling tide of cooled-off lovers, An ice-dance of chilled love affairs, Oh I love this one!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy...different from your norm....but YEP, a cool one it is! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ If it's about the moon ... I love it~  'Still...this cool, Moon sits on high Reigning over the passion-flower dreams Of the self-serving seekers of Love.' And this is just a wonderfully image-matic verse~ VERY much enjoyed this read~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The thawing of hearts, the chilling of loves...the sadness of death. Well written ThisDiamond |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O, Ivy, you give me chills up and down my spine. Makes me want to start a nice warm fire close by. ((Ivy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've read this a few times, and it's better with every read. You not only allowed me to SEE it in my mind, but the atmosphere translated exceptionally well. Enjoyed much! Thank you. |
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