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Somewhat Lovers
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Somewhat Lovers |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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More than friends Less than a couple Somewhat Lovers Headed for trouble? Best friends to be exact Climbing up the ladder A drama queen may over react When love's the subject matter I want to love you Without the fear of losing you I want to kiss and hug you Without ever confusing you I feel we are two peas in a pod Put together by none other than God Two sunflowers dancing in a field Somewhat lovers, starting to yield We could be lovers If you want that risk Am I in love with you? I plead the fifth [This message has been edited by RosePetal (04-14-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Joanna, I dream so so so much of being your lover, for I want to make you the happiest girl you can be and even while we are a couple thousand miles apart, I believe somehow we do have a future in sight together! (kisses on lips) You will always be the girl of my dreams, my sweet Shakira in spirit, I love you sweetie! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-05-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rosey Posy darling girl Oh my goodness! This is sooo amazing, the flow of this as always is perfect, the form is utterly divine as is the rhyme scheme Love this I absolutely love it. Utterly utterly perfect Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed, you have again written this with your customary skill and grace, Joanna darling girl oh I love this, title Somewhat Lovers Ahhh that feeling of possibility there’s nothing like that a the beginning of a relationship. Well, except the perfect joy of a relationship this is heaven sent and fills you with wonder. Wonderful writing I love it love it love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-14-2002 07:33 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Joanna.... Love the theme and the flow is sooo smooth... Enjoyed so much sweetie! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey hunny i can hear a song in this  very beautiful. thank you for sending me this. i saved it. *hugs her tight* as always beautiful work. left me speechless. and thats hard to do hehehehehelove ya jesse Another town another hotel room |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) It hurts me so much to see such a gorgeous poem with so few replies buried down here, especially from the girl I love so so much!  Wait, I KNOW!!! I'll give it a nice bump back to the top! YAY!!! You will always be the lover of my heart, sweet friend, I love you my Joanna! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-04-2002 11:16 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Somewhat lovers. Time will tell, and some of it needs to be in real time. I do understand though.  Who will be traveling?You needn't answer....except via a private email.  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Joanna One day you will make someone so very happy and I hope that love and happiness is returned to your loving heart. This was so beautiful. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joanna... When dreams taken to heart of love wanting to start Awake in the morn new one love found just for two.. You will find this love...I think he knocks upon your door... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a lovely poem to the one you love. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Joanna. I hope things work out and you become perfect lovers Sandra |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
RosePetal, this is such a lovely poem!!! I really like this stanza... I want to love you Without the fear of losing you I want to kiss and hug you Without ever confusing you I think it hits my button, coz that's how I think I react in love.  Thank you for sharing this!_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Let's hear it for the 5TH!!! My son went through this --- best friends that thought they wanted more but were afraid of upsetting the cart and THEY ARE A FANTASTIC COUPLE!!! Go for it...if it doesn't work you've really lost nothing because if the friendship doesn't survive, then it was gonna fade anyway...this I believe. Just hold back the LOVE bit until you get the LIKE bit down somewhat (beyond friends I mean> Good luck!! jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We shall see...James |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Like peas in a pod, indeed some do go together! Enjoyed Deb |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Joanna, this is very sweet and gave me a smile. Nice work! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
More than friends Less than a couple Somewhat Lovers Headed for trouble? I love the way you wrote this, Joanna... This morning, I spoke to my ex-daughter in law (we are still friends ) and she is in a relationship, somewhat like the one you describe in this passage. It was just so ironic to see it here because thats exactly how she described it to me.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
very nice, Joanna I can totally relate to this. Love your title... it really drew me into reading this poem!...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank You all It makes me happy to hear that many of you can relate to this and understand it |
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