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On Hallowed Shore |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
THIS is when you are at your best when leaving stories of the test when knowing east is knowing west, yes, this is when you're at your best... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! Marge! Do I ever like the way you've laid out this beautiful poem from your native heart! The graphics fit the words perfectly. Write on forever White Feather! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've left me without words... but I know you hear my heart... This is stunning. *S* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so eloquent! Expressive of the deep emotions you have for your heritage. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ This morning I got up before the sun ... took my cup of coffee and went to sit the quiet of the morn~ From the woods they came ... Spirits of the ancient voices ... telling me ..... compelling me ... to write their song~ I'm very blessed by the *gift* of the voices~ SuthernGal .... yes ! Thank you everyone~ This one feels soooooooooo good~ It shows me that the Ancient Spirits have made the pilgrimage with me to my new home~ I am sooooooooo happy~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You never cease to please. Enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister this was spectacular, you have such power in your words, never do you fail to inject atmosphere into your writing not many can do that even half so well. YOU always do, you write the scene, you recreate it within the mind of the reader, Are you good, is this divine, well, only if you need air to breathe it is. I can see exactly what you are saying I could read it a million times and it would still make me misty eyed with delight. Absolutely superb writing I love it utterly utterly love it Thank you for this wonder   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You listen well...and you pass on the words..thank you for that! I'm sure that was how it was meant to be. Hugs! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge...I have always been fascinated by the native lore....Very much enjoyed this poem...Yes, you listen very well.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I am soooo happy to see the writings of your ancient ancestors again. This is just spectacular and has again left me breathless and near tears. 'Where Spirits of my people walk, seeking peace...forevermore.' Oh how heartbroken they must be to see the messes we have gotten into and the destruction of their beautiful land. Love ya, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Back to add this to my library. *S* And before you wonder... that was AWE making me forgetful, not blonde. *G* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am glad they made the journey with you Marge, you are blessed in their spirits....Hugs Like a red brick, |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge...this poem is absolutely beautiful, but I must admit, I found it difficult to read on my screen in its presentation. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Forevermore indeed... This is wonderful...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such pride and strength in this work...my favorite so far. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ It's a true pleasure to 'enjoy' with you~ MarshaLove~ You're a sweetheart of the Nth degree ~ MartieSis~ I sure try, sweetie~ They come so peacefully to the open spirit of my heart~ Magnus~ The legends are meant to be shared ... it has been said to me that is my mission in life to try to do so ...~ Thank you dear poet~ Marti~ Yes, my friend ... the Spirits are walking in the creek beds of tears shed~ When the Rainbow Warriors come ... they will bring peace for all who are ready~ I 'listen' until they come~ SuthernGal~ Yes, my friend ... I do know you soooooo well, just as you know me~ (LOL ... and we're both a little 'blonde' at times)  GentleSpirit~ Thank you ... indeed I feel blessed with the visions they bring~ Hootie~ Thanks gal ... sorry 'bout your monitor .. some minor adjustments to your settings should make it okay~ Nanners~ I'm soooooo glad you like it~ Honest Injun ! ThisDiamond~ Why, thanks so much~ *Hugs8 ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is gorgeous, Marge...and so artistically done too!  ~ hallowed hugs Lyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-08-2002 06:00 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Thank you sweet gentle lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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