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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-04-14 10:30 AM


I give to Him your heart to hold
to keep from earthly harm
I give to Him the moments told
of all your worldly charm.

I leave to you the softness shared
from dreams of us each night
I leave to you the passions flared
in words I boldly write

I wish to you eternal peace
a smiling , laughing face
I say to you, I now release
returning you the space

I left a bit of me behind
half of my broken heart
I left it there that you might find
carry with you each part

I’ll keep you here where you’ll reside
for life and eternity
I’ll let you remain and abide
as always you will be.

So it is and so it shall
in life and love and all
truest moments swell
in dreams of our recall.


[This message has been edited by Magnus (04-14-2002 10:33 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-14 10:35 AM



Well look at this Sunday gift....it is lovely....and it is a Keeper, sir...

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-04-14 10:38 AM


Thank you shining sun....and good morning to
you on the plains...

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3 posted 2002-04-14 12:52 PM




(smiles) This is such a wonderful contribution to Sunday, sweet friend, may He always hold all our hearts close within His light and console us whenever we ask of His patience! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-14 01:35 PM


Barry this is a beautiful Sunday keeper...
Thank you....Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-04-14 01:41 PM


Magnus...WOW!!!!!!  This is one of the prettiest poems I've ever read.  If I could give you an award, it would merit 5*****s(stars.)  ***Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2002-04-14 06:04 PM


Very nice Magnus...James
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