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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we picked flowers in the talk forest you wore some in your hair and took some for later to make your room smell like what we remembered I pushed you in the pool there in our discussion when you stopped to tie a shoe but I pulled you out again and you turned away in modesty I had a blanket in the car I said but my arms were closer and you admitted you wondered how they felt if they would they fit over and around and would I warm you inside could I really touch you beyond skin ©Dark |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh. The word 'sigh' means a lot to me, over some years it's developed its own context that extends well beyond a expellation of air...it carries texture, weight, melancholy and hope... this poem..this poem produces such a sigh..and that one word is very heartfelt. Thanks for this, I'm so glad I found it - going into my rarely used library..  K~All my life I've been crazy I may hold the answer a 1000 times through it's my law~ A.M [This message has been edited by Severn (04-08-2002 07:18 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sigh is music to me often heard it misused but yours was a note of true thanks ms |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes, you take me back...and I wonder if in real anyone is as romantic and sensual as your words always appear to be... this one stops my heart... Always your words can touch M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you Ms NT we are all real when we let that part come out.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dang....your poetry is what I look for first thing in the mornings  I'll second that sigh because she described it perfectly |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
There's a lot to like in this... a lot, indeed... thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your words touch beyond skin.... and the word that always comes to mind when I read you is -- intense. very very cool write DS...I love the slow burn of your words. jm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, thanks for your sigh too, you make me smile and look that way. Soleil, thank you for the review and for the thoughts JanetMarie, you insprire me to do more with your reads, thank you lady |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You are making some sighs with this lovely subject...beyond skin is something every woman longs for, I think. One of the sighs is mine. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Martie, thank you for that sigh, hope you wear it for all day. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
More sighs from here This is beautiful. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such soft sensuality always fills your gorgeous words, sweet friend, your words never fail to bring a smile to my face, just as I know your love will always sigh reading them! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And to the depth of soul... Wonderful. ThisDiamond |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You do know how to catch a woman's breath DS~ But you're not about to push me in the pool, I'm too quick for you! You're poems are so much fun to read. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Y E S Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-08-2002 11:39 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sandra, thank you for the sighs can I send a hug in return? Noah, you are so kind my friend thank you Diamond, I appreciate you much, thank you Lauren, always a pleasure to have your eyes on my words Blueslady...so you are quick..can't push you into the pool/pond? Seems like a dare to me...let me put on my Bluez finder... Thanks babe |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Oooooh!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchantress thank you sweet lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep...good stuff... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ohh...I like you. I must echo all the sighs here. Yes, you really could touch somebody beyond skin...your words certainly already do! ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, thank you for the touches you make my afternoons too Smittykitty, sighs are welcome bring them in a big box..all you can carry..thank you |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
(Only me..had to let you know I keep coming back and reading this...) K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I bet you could |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'we picked flowers in the talk forest you wore some in your hair and took some for later to make your room smell like what we remembered' I love the images in these lines and the whole poem, DS...truly an excellent write! I truly enjoyed...your style is amazing... sp    And though my heart feels all alone without you |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yeah..I came back again DS. You can't appreciate how...relevant this is...in an odd, topsy turny way. Thanks for writing my soul in this. K - I'll leave ya alone now I promise. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Severn... your return is a treasure..thanks lady no don't leave me alone...smile |
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