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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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cotton sand candy feeds our feet mouths toe laughter giggles prints we do drunk walk and tangle limb tree shadows you throw glances and show sunburn edges when you lift your lady hem and pretend you are not a lady then run away slow motion I throw myself subtle like tumble rocks downhill then am knightly in my capture how swiftly I surround you with arm circle spells you say you believe in my magic ©Dark |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy may the stars catch you up in a net of wonder and the moons glow light your dreams, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous This is excellent and as always I love it. Is that a subtle nuance of heated sighs I hear? The softly falling rain that covers my soul with desires scented heat and delight? I think so I really think so. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. Does writing get any better than this? Well, if it does, YOU will have written it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well I personally believe you are a magic man DS. Yep, being caught in your magic arm circle spells ........*s* can picture it now. *w* Lovely write, good morning sir Dark. Like a red brick, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your magic your cape your sorcerer's stick... I do believe we believe in them all |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I believe in the magic of those arm circle spells when you are playfully loving like this. A time for lightheartedness and closeness. I really think she wanted to be caught....hate to break it to ya this way!! This is a super write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
marsha, you arre lovely in your pinkish purple ink, thank you so much, I enjoy you GS, slow hugs lady friend, bless your day and your nights..thank you babe Sunshine, Good morning ms, you blush me, and I enjoy the heat of the warm, thanks sweet lady Ethome, thank you so much..and yes I suspect it was a mutual capture in this image. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-31-2002 07:04 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo be4autiful, sweet friend, I just love the cotton candy visions you create here, and may your love always rise like the sea foam Aphrodite was when she was born and have you believe in magic always! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I believe in magic.*s* These words and you are! ~Friday Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love this! Your words of innocence captured in just a few lines. Beautiful way to greet the day. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, thanks bud, you are too kind Enchantress, thaaannnnks lady for the sexy eyes and hi' words PhaChi, good morning lady of the north, slow hug thanks to you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS To play and laugh keeps love fresh, and opens the heart to joy. Much enjoyed the lovingness of this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie thanks lady for your comments and your replies you always make me smile [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-31-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I believe in your magic, although it's pretty amazing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I may not believe in magic, but I believe in the power of love to bind and enthrall...loved the images here DS! Nicely done! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Kethry, thanks lady K for your read and for believing in magic..we all need to sometimes. Dulci, such a treat to have your eyes close, thanks lady friend for the review |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love the playfull feal of this... enjoyed very much ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
connie, thanks for your "enjoy" appreciate you ms |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
All of your words are magic.. They make things happen inside our minds. Now if we just knew the magic word..to keep you writing them!..how about "More"..  Sincerely, Reg |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
It's the last line that gets me. Magic - where is it my friend? Is there any I wonder, in this world. Love the poem DS  K |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina magic word to keep me writing?..first person requests are all that is required...they work like magnets. now you know..am waiting??? (grin) severn, you bless me lady, thanks for your eyes on my offerings |
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