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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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 Take Me, I'm Yours A little coy, almost unwilling yet eager to slip into seduction, he dances the tango around her flirt edging his breath across her desire, setting afire her heart in waiting through the sighs that bloom in magnolia garlanding her feathered smile Her cheeks blush in brush of his touch in trace of fingertips down curves of spine; he plays the sultry, cream keys of her tenderness as lips savour the back of neck tantalizing all realms of sense, standing hairs on end in applause He plants the seed inside of her giving life to love and ying to yang as she becomes of him, as one lingering within his hunger, his thirst turning skin inside out Like winged horses they gallop through strides of eroticism neither knowing of space or time, yet holding fast to the boundless chemistry that currents within their veins lifting them up to sky, unimagined even in fantasy He adorns her womanly enchant like a matador consuming provacative prowl melting her soul in slow burn of intensity with flame red sensuality. And he folds in the come hither wink of her brilliant jade eyes that holds an ocean of emotion in their sparkling depth, eyes that he could drown in and never want to struggle for air; in stare that capture and mesmerize and hold him in their grasp, a willing prisoner just from a look in her eyes that softly whisper, take me...I'm yours By Melissa P. Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-13-2002 08:57 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
in stare that capture and mesmerize and hold him in their grasp, a willing prisoner just from a look in her eyes that whisper, take me...I'm yours ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WOW!!! Melissa...I love it! Well done poetess. hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Provocative and passionate write...thank heaven for the feathers to fan! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A quick cold shower...and I'll be back to respond! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Like winged horses they gallop through strides of eroticism neither knowing of space or time, yet holding fast to the boundless chemistry that currents within their veins lifting them up to sky, unimagined even in fantasy"   (smiles) Oooohhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with such heavenly love! (kiss on cheek) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
he dances the tango around her flirt edging his breath across her desire, ============================== through the sighs that bloom in magnolia garlanding her feathered smile ============================== youve got some very cool phrases and analogies here Melis...unique and well done. love the intensity of this sensual tasteful write of passion. beautiful writing Poetess Melibee DEER...put your clothes back on LOL |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melissa,  What a sensual, passionate, inspiring and truly delightful write. [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-14-2002 02:00 AM).] |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
It's a sensual stunner for sure. You just keep pouring these out, don't ya! well, I had my 'missy' fix for the day, it's all good. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 *BUMP* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You sure wrote this goood...brings many thoughts to mind...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Melissa - I'm in complete awe of this writing. This is truly exquisite, and I love it. I don't know what else to say about the way you've written this... BC |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Beautiful. I do believe this is one of my favorites from you I say that alot I know, but you keep topping yourself. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, this has a feel to me of a writing aout a past life. Don't know why. Very impessive word stylings, as always. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks Larry for the *Bump* Nancy, ThisDiamond, Duncan, Balladeer, Noah, Larry, JM, Chels, JamesMichael, Bill, Tara and Sandra ~ Once I saw that picture of the cherokee lovers, the words just poured out. Thank you for your wonderful replies! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-21-2002 12:22 AM).] |
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