Open Poetry #20 |
The Happiness You Bring |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
It's raining in my heart When you are away from my side I walk this beach alone My happiness taken with the tide But my smile always returns When we are together as one As you wrap your arms around me And tenderly kiss me beneath the sun Our hands interlace together As we stroll along the sand You stop to tell me you love me Then gently kiss the back of my hand You look deeply into my eyes And know exactly how I feel You ignite my inner passion As your lips on mine now seal The warm wind blows around us As the sun starts sinking low My heart growing ever fonder As love continues to bloom and grow Our love rides on waves of devotion And floats on waters clear and blue We'll sail towards the sunset As I deliver my love to you Suetang |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...absolutely perfect Sue! Enjoyed so very much. Hugs. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love always bring you true happiness and share you all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The sun and the surf in the air of this beautiful tune. Nice melody. ThisDiamond |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! The beach is the most romantic setting! Lovely write! Shenachie |
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