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The Pure Rush
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The Pure Rush |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
The Pure Rush As I paddle out the waves crash over my head I can feel the currents below me moving I sit for little looking at the horizon waiting for the one waiting for the great ride First A feeling came over me then I saw it A great wall of water headed for land I get ready knowing I have to do it right My heart is pumping fast And my body is shaking knowing I make it or die Here it comes it raises me to an incredible height Then for seconds I'm in flight I look around and I'm in gulfed By the wave The beauty The peace The Wholeness Bang! I hit the water Now I speeding fastern then ever Out of the tube and into safety Feeling the pure rush Of peace and insanity |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous images here, very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Beyond words! I felt so there also! Wonderful, powerful write here!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What location...James |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
JamesMichael It's actually a place in florida. It's one of my secret spots between New symerna and ormond beach. I cuaght it when a storm was comin in. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Matt..well I know you to well...but I still liked it..I knew it only be a matter of time before you wrote about your true love.LOL. -Neala |
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