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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-06-09 07:11 PM


Whispers Of Feeling

There’s whispers of longing on the breeze
Mere flutters of feeling breathing yes please
Feel the heat as it circles through you
Its filling your dreams with fires heated dew
I can summon heat and call the flame
That burns on within driving you insane
Don’t fear to hold my yes in heats bliss
Just feel passion at the taste of my kiss

There’s a hint of needs uttered by you
Naught but murmurs of a wish warm and true
Imagine the pleasure that you could touch
It’s the taste of heat that you want so much
I will enchant you with fire's light
Then capture your soul in my heat tonight
Hold fast to dreams they may fly away
And you need your dreams its there that I stay

There’s a touch drifting in paths of night
Ethereal thoughts that float through dawns light
Without tears that seem to live within
You’ll find that love’s hope is never a sin
No fears can harm you’ll be safe from pain
Love will come calling on you once again
Those whispers of longing hold you still
Seem stronger at night they take your minds will

Marsha




Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

[This message has been edited by Marsha (06-09-2002 07:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-09 07:19 PM


Seem stronger at night, they take your mind's
will......hmmmmm....let me see...where was
I before I was taken into another world of
Mushy's fire....

Nicely done,

Yes Darling Girl...Nicely done..

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-06-09 07:26 PM


MarshaLove~
You've been romanticizing again ....
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!
Utterly delightful~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-09 07:34 PM


There’s a touch drifting in paths of night
Ethereal thoughts that float through dawns light
Without tears that seem to live within
You’ll find that love’s hope is never a sin

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, Marsha...
and I love the rest of the poem also...
especially some of those hot, sinful lines.
No one writes those better than you do.

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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