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A Spirit Lost ... |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
A gentle rain in darkness falls, Softly the winds cry a silent call. Yet it eases not this wanton soul, The journey ahead is still unknown. Moonlight amidst the blushing blankets peek, Yet it lit not the road I seek. Such sweet sorrow in stillness stir, A spirit lost... its path unclear... ... "Everything will be okay at the end ... If it's not okay, then it's not the end..." (can't remember who said it!) [This message has been edited by Verve (06-09-2002 12:49 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad but a great description of a spirit lost! Nicely done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Verve Well done, enjoyed. |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
ohh..geez..I'm right there inside of this one. loved the language of this one. Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Regina~ This is just so lovely~ 'Moonlight amidst the blushing blankets peek' Especially enjoyed this imagery~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh! I truly love this. Though not long, it's packed with beauty and sadness.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, this says a lot. I know the feeling, too. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This yearns for a story... very nice, perhaps a series of the spirit's wanderings... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
quote: I can certainly relate to this Verve, how many times have I made the wrong decision and found my spirit had lost its true path. Very well said!  |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
ethome, Seymour, Marge, TwoHearts & PdV: thank you all for your wonderful replies ... it's truly heartfelt. Sandra & Dulcinea: Guess most of us will have moments like these .... I do sometimes wonder if I would be able to see the answers when they are placed right in front of me ... Sunshine: Thank you for that thought ... Hm ... i think i will seriously consider trying my hand at that ... And thank you, everyone, for dropping in ... *HUGZ* |
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