Open Poetry #20 |
With the Words of a Poet |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Am I crazy? I think I am I took him back Once again. Why did I do it? It's hard to say It's hard to keep This feeling at bay. Things are different Very much so But once again I'll give it a go. If he wants me He'll work for me If he loves me He won't let me be... until I am his; But now he may choose To leave me after all Those lessons I've learned Are things I'll never loose. He apologised in the most beautiful way With the words of a poet That caused me to say "I'll take you back, just remember one thing, this time I won't let you play me like a string." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh Rhonda, you go, always follow your heart, for love is meant to keep a friendship and if one can't contribute, your heart can't be touched! (sigh) This is powerfully sincere, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
That is great. I am happy for you both. But I will still worry about you two. I don't want to see neither of you hurt. My worst enemy is myself! |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
So in otherwords: "GO RHONDA, GO ANDREW!" Whoosh! My worst enemy is myself! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Love is meant to numb our minds so our hearts can listen. Best wishes. Enjoyed your work. ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wish you the best, I hope it works.....and never let them "own" the string... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
If he wants me He'll work for me If he loves me He won't let me be... Wise words indeed, Rhonda... and also a beautiful poem. ~ wishing you luck hugs Lyra |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Poetic words to melt a poetic heart. Good luck to you both. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wish you the very best and this is a wonderful piece of writing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...but these experiences can change our feelings...so if he's smart he'll make up his mind...James |
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