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Tanzanite
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since 2002-05-30
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0 posted 2002-06-07 02:35 PM


You brought out the evil within my eyes.
For many year your soul I've despised.
myself well being was to live life timid,
as my frustration level exceeded the highest limits.
emotionaly led me astray, with false advise
you insulted my beliefs, and almost made me cry.
left me disheartened and broken inside,
with vulnability the faster i fell/
with insecurity i found an eerie comfort zone at the bottom of your well/
on an emotional rollercoaster depriving my pride,
had to look within to find a voice of confide
speakin my mind was forbidden so I kept it inside,
till my two personalities began to collide.
looked inside and outside and not a single soul replied,
as I watched my life spiral and subside.
I could not escape your terror-filled lies.
But you knew that eventually the time would  come
to a point where I wouldnt let myself become, half as dumb,
succumb to scums like you, who made my life cumbersome.
I was almost a fallen victim until I realized only I can save myself.
I rose from a caged hell to heaven on earth with no more rage felt,
while pickin up the pieces from the past as I crawled amidst the rubble of my shattered puzzle.

By Tanzanite Samson

© Copyright 2002 Tanzanite - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-06-07 02:40 PM


Glad to see you have found those missing puzzle pieces. It's a good feeling, isn't it, to come out the other side of a really dark cloud? I enjoyed the read.
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