Open Poetry #20 |
Paranoid |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You think I'm paranoid? I see you looking at me like that I feel the empty void Talk to me, not behind my back What is going on? Is it satisfaction you achieve? I'm a girl without feelings Is that what you believe? You arms made me feel so safe Now they just push me away They used to open to protect me Now they fold to reject me No, I am not paranoid I see how loves dies I'm disturbed by a boy With deceitful eyes My eyes can now reflect on you apparent inner flaws That I should've inspected Guard down brought the unexpected I must wisen up, choose carefully In a wide selection of men Only that ONE will care for me The others will break my heart again [This message has been edited by RosePetal (06-07-2002 01:05 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You've done a good job of portraying the betrayed heart. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Only if you let them. Admiring you at Passions. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I know just how you feel, I too want to love someone who is beautiful and has a loving golden heart, and you fit that description so much to me! (kisses) This is soooooo heartfelt, sweet friend, know I will always love you, for you are the girl of my dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully expressed, Joanna... but remember, no one can take advantage of you without your permission. ~ understanding hugs Lyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal Wise words and a good write. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Only that one will care for you Indeed this much is true Don't seal your heart from others though Just love them nice and slow Excellent write Joanna! *hugs* Been there, done that, as you know. A broken heart may hurt me, but a broken heart won't kill me. |
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