Open Poetry #20 |
Cuchullin's Hounds |
bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
CUCHULLIN'S HOUNDS LONG PAST THAT GALLANT EASTER DAY TWAS SUNDAY MORN THE 5TH OF MAY BLACK AND TANS HAD BURNED OUR HOME THEN LEFT MY FATHER DYING MY MOTHER STOOD TOO PROUD TO CRY WITH ONE LAST KISS SHE SAID GOODBYE THEN GATHERED ME BEYOND THE FLAMES TO TELL OF ERIN'S HEROS FROM FINN McCOOL'S OWN FENIAN BAND TILL NOW AS ENGLAND RULES OUR LAND THERE'S ALWAYS BEEN A BROTHERHOOD TO DEFEND OUR IRISH NATION DEFIANT LADS WHO ARN'T AFRAID FOR FREEDOMS CAUSE THEIR OATHS ARE MADE BY BLOOD AND BONES EARTH AND SKY THEY'LL CLEAR THE MURKY WATERS YOUR FATHER WAS A CHOSEN ONE A LEADER OF CUCHULLIN'S SONS BRAVE AND FIERCE HIS HOUNDS DID FIGHT ALL AGAINST THE TYRANTS SOLDIERS JUST NOW MY LOVE A LAST COLD FACT THE DEVIL WEARS A UNION JACK WE SUFFER ON OUR BENDED KNEES ASKING WHERE'S OUR GOD DEFENDING MAY SAINT MICHAEL TEACH YOU HOW TO STAND PLACE HIS BRIGHT SWORD IN GROWING HANDS TO RID THESE DEMONS FROM OUR LAND AVENGE YOUR FATHER'S MEMORY I GREW UP QUICK THEN WENT AWAY IN BELFAST JOINED THE I.R.A. I MARRIED AND WE HAD A SON JUST BEFORE THE BULLET HIT ME SO...THIS IS WHY THE BELLS HAVE RUNG.... THE BATTLES FOUGHT... BUT NEVER WON FROM WAY UP HERE I SCAN THE CROWD......... CUCHULLIN'S HOUNDS ARE DANCING. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bags123, An exceptional write, I know a little of the Irish they are a proud people. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very interesting Irish piece.... Though it is sad to see humanity continue to war and shed blood over their differences. Happens everywhere....even here at home on our own streets... Nice write...you will become an enjoyable part of passions.. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks Seymour, all people have a natural pride if they're given the opportunity. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Hi Magnus, War is an enivitability of human nature. Sad but true. The same compulsion which drives the human race to achieve such advances in technology, and the humanities, is also responsible for our warlike natures. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very good write indeed. Putting in all in CAPS emphasizes a lot, particularly the anger one would feel in this poem. Sometimes as you may know, CAPS are akin to "SHOUTING" your words. In this instance, it works. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Ah, laddie, faith! an' it does me 'eart good to see a fightin' eart, ere. an' one wha 'ates the bloody Union Jack like a true Gael. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks Sunshine and gunslinger, Tis a bonnie day for the IRA |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
bags A very interesting read, well done! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks for reading Marti |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A very gripping read... well done! |
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