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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2002-06-05 05:24 PM



~This will be my last post.I'm going away....I don't know if I'll be returning but I wanted to say that my time here has been absolutely wonderful and I wish each and everyone of you the best in life.~

You have such a beautiful name, one that has carried me through alot of pain
I want you to know that I know you love me many times you said that to me
I want you to know I'm dying without you...I have no idea what to do
My attempts to contact you have failed, I always put the phone down
I would give anything in the world to have you back again
Lana, I want you to know that I hate you for loving me and then leaving the way you did
I also love you though,I'm torn inside all I know is I need you.

For Lana G. Cervantes-whom I love more than anything.

[This message has been edited by ParisGrl (06-05-2002 11:17 PM).]

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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
1 posted 2002-06-05 08:00 PM


I hope you come back, this is beatiful poetry, I think we can all relate to this poem, I have the same problem right now; it's killing me ... we just have to try and smile and carry on . Good luck whatever it is that you go to do, and I wish you happiness wherever and whatever you do/go .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-06-05 09:00 PM


hmmm...there was a poem I read once, by a poet I've since forgotten, but the gist of it was

"I said that your love caused me nothing but pain. Then I realized it was simply your absence that I perceived as pain..."

It's something to think about, yes?

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2002-06-05 09:09 PM


Pain is the darkness when a star blinks, love is it's light, and there is far more of one than there is of the other.  Pain showcases the pleasure of love while love erases pain, and
all things pass for those who never stop walking; sunrise is always beautiful.

Keep walking, my friend, and all of life will be yours.


jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (06-05-2002 09:10 PM).]

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2002-06-06 06:05 AM


laura,

hi...this sadenned me to read...yes i still
care. i had hoped you and lana would work
out, and im sorry things have not. im also
sorry to see you going. laura, i hope that
whatever you do in life and whomever you
end up with...that you are happy. if you
need someone to talk to feel free to
email me or im me...amy4jena. maybe two
friends could sit down and discuss some
of this...my door is open. anyways take
care of yourself...

~amy~

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2002-06-06 06:59 AM


Gonna miss ya and this kind of poetic language!
Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
6 posted 2002-06-06 01:18 PM


Laura,
Courage friend...courage. And thank you for your encouragement that you have offered me.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

ParisGrl
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

7 posted 2002-06-07 03:30 PM


Thank you all for your encouragement......my life is taking me in a million directions right now and i need time to figure it out.

Amy,

I still care about you too.....I hope that you are very happy with Jena and wish you both the very best.  I'll be in touch.....if you would like to IM me sometime my screen name is ParisGrl2478.

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