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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tears In Hide ~Marge Tindal*~ o 0 0 Tears in hide soon will subside to fall on another day when you are no longer here to catch me in complete disarray Treading of tears is an art of sorts that I simply could not master alone Yet they flow in the sad after-know that they completely sweep me away Lost in a current of torrential shed waiting as the trickle runs so deep Knowing that when they are gone so will be my reason to weep For you will not be here to catch them when they fall~ o 0 Tears in hide ... not yet cried ~*~ ~The thing I like best about being a poetess is sometimes ... it's 'just a poem'~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-06-2002 08:55 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again, such stunning writing and presentation sweet lady. Yep, sometimes those tears are waiting in hide, and darn they show up at the worst times. Hugs poetess dear. Like a red brick, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is so beautiful Marge dear I think we all have tears in hide But I'll promise, I'll make you laugh in September LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Thank you dear lady~ Sending BIG *HUGS*~ Titia~ My dear ... I have NO DOUBT that we will be heard laughing all over the west coast of Florida .... and probably clear to the other side~ I'm warming up my 'laugh machine'~ Thanks for the sweet reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a treat of a poem, Marge... It looks as beautiful as it reads.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't know how you manage to do it...but you always have something very special with your poems... Never an old dull ordinary poem like mine.... And that makes your poetry very beautiful! (smile) Thanx.. Magnus |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marge! You snuck in a bluesy lonely poem on tears.....and I really enjoyed the read! Dear Marge have no fear when you're sad write your tears here at Passions where all hear You know that we'll catch them dear! Great write as usual Marge! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I really appreciate the unorthodox structure of your piece. the thoughts expressed in such a sad format really make the whold thing work better. Cool!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ I thank you ... when the words lay gentle on the eyes that's a special treat for me~ Magnus~ Sweetie ... NOTHING 'dull' in anything you've posted ... I just sometimes find a need to use the whole box of Crayons !  Hey ... if nothing else ... the formatting alone slows me down or the forums would be flooded.  ETHome~ As I told a friend this morning ... I often don't know the 'why' of my ink ... but usually there's someone out there that let's me write their hearts~ I appreciate that~ Thank you sweet friend ... I know the comfort of the circle of friends here~ Bags~ I appreciate your reply. I just have so much fun 'word-painting' Welcome to Passions~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I certainly know where those hidden tears flow from. ~sigh~ Very well done Marge! And a beautiful presentation as well! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a wonderful poem. You've really put a lot of effort into the presentation, coz it's sooo beautiful!!! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: What a special piece! I am a "tear hider" and a "closet weeper", so I really relate to this one. Of course, almost everything you write touches me in a profound way. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Such a gift you have. Incredible. Duel meanings in this poem make it special to me as well. Thank you dear friend. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You are always so lovely!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Marge...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful... poem and presentation both. *S* And anytime you want to flood the forums, you just let me know. *G* I'll find a sturdy rowboat, make myself comfortable... and read and read and read. *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (06-07-2002 03:49 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sad one Marge, but great imagery with your artist way with words. Deb |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Marge! I like the way you did this. And, I love the poem. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
A better presentation, I've never seen. This poem is such a treat! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let them hide... For without them, there would be no laughter... Nicely done, Marge.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dulcinea~ Thank you so much for the reply~ MonCherie~ I sure appreciate that ! BettyLou~ Ahh, and it's another 'connection' we have. Thank you dear lady~ OhLarry~ I just 'knew' it was meant to 'fall' for someone ... thank you ... thank you~ MartieSis~ You haven't seen me at 5:08 a.m. Thanks tweetie~ JamesMichael~ Thank ya' dahling~ SuthernGal~ Row, row, row your boat~ You is such a doll !  VanDana~ Thanks hon~ BloomingRose~ Awww, thankee sweet lady~ SuzieQ~ Thanks always my friend~ EarthenSoul~ Thanking you so very much. Welcome to Passions~ Nanners~ LOL ... tried *smothering* that laughter ... darn stuff just wrestled with me and won !!! Thanks you sweet friend~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
WOW .... this is way cool man ... Really diggin' the aesthetics of your poetry here ... Loved it!!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tears in hide ... not yet cried'' I am learning this feeling and this meaning.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Verve~ Thank you so much~ GreenEyes~ ~Sending Hugs~ Nice to see you sweet lady~ BIG HUGS~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl when you write a tear the angels themselves look to see how its done. This is a beauty you really draw the most perfect pictures of poetic heart in sorrow or laughter. This of course is no exception. I’m so looking forward to September I simply can’t wait to see you in action and to listen to bill play for us all. You know there is no one I’d want to share both my tears and my laughter with more than you, well except mum and she doesn't count she has to do so it’s written in the mummy contract. You do know about the Mummy Contract don’t you? Of course you do, it’s delivered along with the baby. Although I think I have a Margie girl Contract somewhere as well which is very similar  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyAngel~ You are such a delight ... I cannot contain myself until September .... come on over NOW !!!! Bill is strumming in the background as I write you .... you gals are gonna LOVE him as much as I do~ Thanks sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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