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being. . . everything |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the brightness shows again in the place where light was known once not dispelling the darkness but, just being out of nothing being out of itself and yet, being into itself this is the place where I find one and not the other where both exist, and neither be a place beyond time and space where thought transforms where the Spirit remains even after it's gone the Heart of Light beats in time and time moves through itself revealing the essence of being and the being of essence time moves astrally and space moves in planes of knowing we move through time, but yet, we remain where we remain the same it's everything else that changes --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dear God Sven! Might that mean that this big belly of mine is not really here?!? Seriously this is wonderful pensive work! I seem to read you into this time and space and the spirit of the hereafter still here lately. Just excellent writing! "a place beyond time and space where thought transforms where the Spirit remains even after it's gone the Heart of Light beats in time and time moves through itself revealing the essence of being and the being of essence" Nice thoughts my friend! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was all caught up in your poem... and then had to ROFL @ ethome's response. *G* I like this very much, Sven... much to think about. *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD darling heart As always you write brilliantly, and with such divinely perfect phrasing and language usage. You’ve painted a wonderful picture here, each line a brushstroke bringing the painting to vibrant life as only YOU can do so. As I said outstandingly good. The flow of this is superb this is a write of awesome magnitude You are an amazing writer, and yes I am just a tad biased, but not a lot…… You really are superb you know. Excellent darling heart you know I love it of course  :loveya Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed Sven, as I have been pondering a lot of these thoughts myself lately. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven, excellent again and again... You make me think back to Rod Serling... standing there talking cryptically about what is fixing to happen in the next mysterious story.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, yes, it's not exactly that we change whatsoever, but we are letting gravity get to us and we forsake our grace so the times seem to change who we are! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, your views of time and space are always intriguing, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Now I feel bad. I'm writing about good lookin' dumb guys and you're writing of higher astral planes! A lovely write, btw. Cor |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This reminds me of Being and Nothingness, very abstract. Good read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
goodness Sven, I have to stop reading you during these late/early hours...it's dark and quiet and your words really get me thinking....(which may or may not be a good thing, who knows?) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
we remain the same it's everything else that changes yep, thats the truth Sven. Very deep and insightful read doll. Well done! Like a red brick, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
eric, yes, you're absolutely right. . . I'm here. . . but, yet, I'm not here. . . thank you my friend. . . and, yes. . . that belly of yours might just be a figment of your imangination. . .  suthern, thank you my friend. . .it's always nice to get people thinking. . . Marsha, thank you love. . . and yes, you are just a tad bit biased. . . but, I don't mind. . . lol. . . Enchantress, it would seem that a lot of us have been thinking this way recently. . . I've been hearing it. . . thank you. . . Magnus, I've been known to do a pretty good Rod Sterling impression. . . "consider now, Sven, a poet, lost in time and space, wondering where he will next show in. . . The Twilight Zone". . . lol. . . thank you. . . Noah, "we are letting gravity get to us". . . hmmmmmmmm. . . perhaps you're right my friend. . . perhaps you're right. . .thank you. . . Cor, hey. . . good looking dumb guys, higher astral planes. . . it's all the same isn't it?? thanks. . . mirror man, yes. . . both and neither. . . you have an understanding. . . keep going. . . thank you. . . ps, I find that the night speaks when we need to hear it. . . we just have to listen. . . thank you. . . James, thank you my friend. . . GS, thank you as always my wonderful friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So we're constant - the rest of existance is on the move.. gotcha... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ahhh, the duplicity of things as they seem. I was seeing an eclipse in my mind as I read this piece...excellent! ThisDiamond |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW.....what a piece of art this is.....very serene and real....much to ponder.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Almost missed this one - WOW!!! (Been busy unpacking - but needed a refreshing break). I'm new to the forums, but I'm glad I clicked on your poem - it's a wonderful confirmation to know that there are other's out there who can think multi-dimensionally as well. This one was great. I will now look up your other poems, as you've really sparked my interest. Great write!!! Sheila |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You have been more intospective than ever, lately. This is a great topic. (I can see you in the TwiligtZone, too..) Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Nan, yup. . . you got it!! thanks. . . ThisDiamond, not just duplicity, but more like. . . multiplicity. . . thank you. . . Lauren, thank you. . . the planes are there. . . we just have to find them. . . alterego, thank you and welcome. . . it's nice to know that there are others out there who walk the planes as well. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . . Sandra, so, does it really show that much?? perhaps, I'm looking at what really matters these days. . . and finding the answers. . . thanks, as always, for reading. . .------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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