Open Poetry #20 |
. . . The invitation . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Desire controls my thoughts. We talk, write, dream, and live for the day we meet. I cannot run my fingers through your hair. I cannot hold your hand as we stroll. I cannot sing love songs to you. You cannot see the expression on my face. You cannot feel my warmth. You cannot hear my voice. We cannot share. We cannot embrace. We cannot meld lips. My mind flits down fantasy lane searching for you. Are you on the street where I live and love? The door is wide open for your entrance into my life. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-07-2002 11:37 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, thats quite an invtation. I love the flow here, and the words are very intriguing. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ This is quite wonderful you know~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper All those things and so many more, when you find love is right next door. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sweeeeeeeeeeet! ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ Heh, heh, heh. Thanx for the read Marge ~ I'm elated that you like it Martie ~ Yes, could be, couldn't it Tiers ~ S-i-i-i-g-h Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whole lot of thinking going on... enjoyed the write... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now who could turn down an invitation like this? Wow! Love the words...and the presentation!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
An eloquent invitation to say the least..........irresistable I'd say if you can get the right reader! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy you are a healer of the night, OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder. Anytime you’re ready kid we could do a time and motion study, if you have the time I have the motion. Truthfully this is exquisite writing and you have to know it is perfect I should have known when I saw your name on this that it would be incredible and it is utterly utterly first class I love it utterly utterly love it. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know your love will always be happy and eager to accept your invitation, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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angeliceyes48198 Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16Michigan,USA |
What an inviting invitation! Love could be right under your nose and you haven't noticed yet! Always keep your heart open as well as your mind! Never stop believing! Dreams do come true! I enjoyed your write very much! Angeliceyes48198 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like the way you did this.... And all of what you wrote is so realistically true!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully expressed, Interloper ~ lots of hugs Lyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I could've quoted the whole poem...perfect. Forgetting all I'm lacking Completely and complete I'll take your invitation You take all of me Lifehouse [This message has been edited by Duncan (06-07-2002 12:05 AM).] |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
I accept. Admiring you at Passions. |
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