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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-06 01:19 PM

Desire
controls my thoughts.
We talk,
      write,
      dream,
and live
for the day we meet.
I cannot
                  run my fingers through your hair.
I cannot
                  hold your hand as we stroll.
I cannot
                  sing love songs to you.
You cannot
                   see
                            the expression on my face.
You cannot
                   feel
                            my warmth.
You cannot
                   hear
                            my voice.
We cannot
                         share.
We cannot
                         embrace.
We cannot
                         meld lips.
My mind
               flits
                       down
         fantasy
      lane
          searching
for you.
Are you on the street where I live and love?
The door is wide open for your entrance into my life.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-07-2002 11:37 AM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-06 01:34 PM

Well, thats quite an invtation. I love the flow here, and the words are very intriguing.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-06-06 01:46 PM

InterLoper~
This is quite wonderful you know~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-06-06 01:48 PM

Interloper

All those things and so many more, when you find love is right next door.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-06-06 01:50 PM

Sweeeeeeeeeeet!

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-06-06 02:12 PM

Sandra ~
Heh, heh, heh. Thanx for the read

Marge ~
I'm elated that you like it

Martie ~
Yes, could be, couldn't it

Tiers ~
S-i-i-i-g-h

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-06-06 02:23 PM

Whole lot of thinking
going on...

enjoyed the write...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-06-06 02:28 PM

Now who could turn down an invitation like this?
Wow! Love the words...and the presentation!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-06-06 04:00 PM

An eloquent invitation to say the least..........irresistable I'd say if you can get the right reader!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-06-06 06:51 PM

Bob darling boy you are a healer of the night, OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder.

Anytime you’re ready kid we could do a time and motion study, if you have the time I have the motion. Truthfully this is exquisite writing and you have to know it is perfect

I should have known when I saw your name on this that it would be incredible and it is utterly utterly first class I love it utterly utterly love it.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-06-06 07:57 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know your love will always be happy and eager to accept your invitation, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

angeliceyes48198
Junior Member

since 2002-05-28

Posts 16
Michigan,USA

11 posted 2002-06-06 09:18 PM

What an inviting invitation! Love could be right under your nose and you haven't noticed yet! Always keep your heart open as well as your mind! Never stop believing! Dreams do come true! I enjoyed your write very much!
Angeliceyes48198

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-06-06 09:20 PM

Like the way you did this....

And all of what you wrote is so realistically
true!!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

13 posted 2002-06-06 11:51 PM

Very beautifully expressed, Interloper

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

14 posted 2002-06-07 12:03 PM

I could've quoted the whole poem...perfect.

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

[This message has been edited by Duncan (06-07-2002 12:05 AM).]

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

15 posted 2002-06-07 02:07 PM

I accept.

Admiring you at Passions.

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