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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-06 10:33 AM



It's been raining here
several days, I watch
through glass
that mirrors back,
darkness falls
moments lack
the need, the call
but all in all,
it's raining still
and guess it will
the emptiness
it has
to fill

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-06-06 12:44 PM


WynterGal~
Felt the chill of the emptiness~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2002-06-06 01:08 PM


liked the simple style and message here.please read rhyme stills, it might put a smile on your face


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-06-06 03:33 PM


Maureen
I love that idea of hard it will have to rain to fill the emptiness....good work my dear poet lady!

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