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Open Poetry #20

She's All That

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-06-06 03:49 AM

"She's all that"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:
There's this girl,
Who lives down the hall from me.
Everyone,
They call her the campus geek.
But there's something about her,
But there's something about her.
Everytime,
I walk past the library.
She sits there,
With Kirkegaards poetry.
She's a cute, birhgt, young lady,
She's a cute, bright, young lady.
My friends they call me crazy,
'Cause I'm not the cheerleader kinda guy.
(They don't see what I see)
But she's got something special,
She make me feel things I can't deny.
(I can't even eat or sleep)
'Cause...

Chorus:
She's so
Lovable,
Totally
Incredible,
So desireble.
She's all that,
She's all that.
She's so
Beautiful,
Completely
Natural,
Irresistible.
She's all that,
She's all that.

Verse 2:
I met her,
Outside the local diner.
I asked her,
If lunch with me would mind her.
She just gently smiled at me,
She just gently smiled at me.
Nervously,
I asked if she liked the theater.
She answered,
Kindly, why not, OK, sure.
Date with the girl of my dreams,
Date with the girl of my dreams.
My friends they call me crazy,
Because I went on a date with the bookworm.
(They don't see what I see)
She make me feel so special,
She make ohter girl look like a bad perm.
(I'm so glad she's my geek)
'Cause...

RE-Chorus:

Bridge:
I look forward to every morning,
'Cause I'm the first to see her beauty.
People ask: "What's that all about"?
They just don't appreciate inner beauty.
And I do...So sue me!!! (I don't care).
Cause...

RE-Chorus:

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-06 07:14 AM

I'd use Eminor, Aminor, and Bminor7th major chords in the verses with a variation of Eminor to D7th or Dminor at the end of some lines.
For sure I'd use Eminor along with Emajor and Amajor in the chorus....Possibly you could use B7th and A7th as a filler in between the verse and chorus.......
Just an idea!

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