Open Poetry #20 |
Beauty has no Shadow |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Leaving too early to post tomorrow so I'll do it now. Beauty has no Shadow Beauty shows no shadows clear It’s invisible my dear It’s a mist collecting dew that Waters the heart and grows with you It has no weight or certain state It’s tied up with your mind and fate With life that occupies the now That floats above the why and how Beauty is a state of mind Some would say a state of blind That vacillates within the heart That some have named a state of art It is a state of transient Magic fluid ingredient And shows in forms that are unique Unto the humble that would seek It’s the passion of every core And the ration of evermore |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Yes,l passion may be invisible, but it is found in every iota of every lovely thing in the world and its presence is all around us in every work of art and every song we sing! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, it is quite a pleasant suprise to see you posting this evening, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And reason only goes to show why I need to have the know of where you are when you have sent a quest of call, of heaven's bent... ... We shall see you when you return... be safe, our Sy... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, Then I shall have my morning inspire this evening. And a beauty it is too Sy! ~Hugs~ Stay safe....Be well. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In the eyes of the beholder...beauty is.. Excellent write Sy...and yes...be safe.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's a mist collecting dew that Waters the heart and grows with you ================================= With life that occupies the now That floats above the why and how Beauty is a state of mind Some would say a state of blind That vacillates within the heart That some have named a state of art It is a state of transient Magic fluid ingredient And shows in forms that are unique Unto the humble that would seek It's the passion of every core And the ration of evermore ====================================== It's a mist collecting dew that Waters the heart and grows with you youre so cool !!! They say that beauty is in the eye of the beholder... All I know is you and Randy get better and better ... as you get older *winkiewinkie* When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You inspire beauty indeed Seymour I love what I read Hope |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ahh how beautiful penned, enjoyed it very much as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I love the title..and of course the poem is lovely...and I sure don't see it's shadow, but it leaves something like it within. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thanks for the smiles. Sunshine, How bright you shine this morning. Enchantress, Thank you dear and lots of hugs back. Magnus, Thank you for the excellent my friend. JM, Thank you love, I shall sadle up Randy soon and we will spend the afternoon. Listening to guitars that sound just lying on the ground. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Thank you James. HopeS, Thank you my dear. Chrisma, Hugs and kisses back. Martie, Very true. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is as always simply perfect. The shadow of beauty is certainly reflected in your beautiful words. You have an uncanny ability to stroke my soul with your writing there’s not that many people whom I allow that close to me. I wish I had your ability to sketch the scene but since I don’t I shall simply delight in your writing. This is utterly utterly superb writing and of course I love it utterly Come back soon and be safe darling heart Sending you a softly blown kiss and a hug for such a wonderful piece of writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your comments are a delight that alight with the greatest polite. And bring this mule to super cool on the icing of your write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some would say a state of blind And darn it, everyone I've met has 20/20 vision! LOL I love every line of this, Seymour... Your work is always exceptional, but some surpass even the high standards you set. *S* This is one... and I shall enjoy it many, many times. *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . beauty simply is. . . and you've shown it well here. . . great work. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, You are a sweetheart. Sven, Thank you my friend. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, everyone has a different idea of beauty, but it is always transient, changing form. Very interesting read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you mirror man, what you say is true. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A state of mind indeed... Reflected only in our hearts' minds... Wonderful, Sy.. |
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