Open Poetry #20 |
Wick Lit |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Wick Lit between your heat I have felt wax I become as I melt leaving me in liquid form wearing this flame I do transform then to air my soul I send where you my breath we blend "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, you are becoming quite good at these short but so well composed romantic poems.. Nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your dreams forever mold from wax into gifts of joy bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Herlen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I shall breathe you in and let you caress my heart ultimate inhale |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . the blending of hearts. . . well done helen. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This pleases me, Helen very much... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this, as I do other things... jwesley |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Yearn Burn Meld Weld An insufficiant answer to a lovely pen. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Helen! |
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