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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-05 02:07 PM



Wick Lit

between your heat
I have felt
wax I become
as I melt
leaving me
in liquid form
wearing this flame
I do transform
then to air
my soul I send
where you my breath
we blend

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-05 02:48 PM


Helen, you are becoming quite good at these
short but so well composed romantic poems..

Nicely done!

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2 posted 2002-06-05 03:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your dreams forever mold from wax into gifts of joy bound to last forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Herlen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-06-05 04:05 PM


I shall breathe you in
and let you caress my heart
ultimate inhale

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4 posted 2002-06-05 04:15 PM


ah yes. . . the blending of hearts. . .

well done helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2002-06-05 04:26 PM



This pleases me, Helen
very much...

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-06-05 07:48 PM


Loved this, as I do other things...

jwesley

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7 posted 2002-06-08 04:08 AM


Yearn
Burn
Meld
Weld

An insufficiant answer to a lovely pen.

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8 posted 2002-06-08 04:12 AM


Very nicely done Helen!
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