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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-05 01:35 PM

I gaze into your eyes of blue,
to seek within the depth of you,
Past silken hair and angel's face,
'Til last I spy of special place,
Where heart and soul entwine as one,
In essence of love once begun,
Blossoming into fair Rose,
In splendor's bloom, blooms heart's disclose.
If it would be within my power,
Ever will I spy thy flower,
Deep within your eyes of blue,
Deep within the depth of you.
I promise this, 'til ends my days,
I ever shall thy beauty gaze,
Within you shines the moon above,
Within you shines the one I love.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-05 01:40 PM

Ah Tim, yet another gem...
you do have a way
of hushing me...

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-06-05 08:22 PM

Wow, a technically brilliant poem; the flow, your word choice, the rhyme, even the subject are all great; I loved the lines ... 'Til last I spy of special place,
Where heart and soul entwine as one,
In essence of love once begun,' ... Sooooooo romantic, meaningful and beatiful .
L.of.L. Tom .
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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-06-05 09:48 PM

Each and every blooming rose in your poetic garden is a winner, m'friend..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-05 11:40 PM

(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you are a true modern Romeo and I know your love will always be lucky to have you! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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