somebody give me a name for this

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kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-05 12:52 PM

Your hands are cold
But I dont mind
Your eyes are warm
They keep you on my mind
This feels so right
Like nothing else before
Because it is you I adore

I know what I want
So what do I do
You said you would be back
So I'm waiting here for you
I love you so much
More then you will ever know
Because sometimes it is so hard to show

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-06-05 12:55 PM

i love this...a good title would be
"The Essence of You" or something like that.
Good writing. I hope she has a warm heart

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2002-06-05 01:16 PM

Love On Hold

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-06-05 01:39 PM

Like this...how about "Waiting For You"
James

nnie
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 14

4 posted 2002-06-05 06:50 PM

heeeey thats a cute poem.keep writting, i wanna read more of your poems.i love you.
-nnie

Mystic Mystron
Member

since 2002-02-15

Posts 69
North York .Ontario

5 posted 2002-06-05 07:04 PM

Great poem

how about....

Waiting for love to come back

You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

6 posted 2002-06-05 09:44 PM

how's about "on my mind"
it's got that stream of conciousness feel to it... all these images of the one you love...
lovely write. short and impacting.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

7 posted 2002-06-05 10:34 PM

I always use the first line when I can't think of a title. "your hands are cold". But that's probably not what you had in mind. Enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-06-05 10:50 PM

I won't give you a suggestion...mine are
never picked...so....I will just say I
think it is a nice poem....and will leave
it "untitled"....

Seriously...good luck on a title...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-06-05 11:28 PM

(smiles) Oh Kinson, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I llve Joanna's suggestion for a title, this is beautiful and reflects the joy in your heart! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kinson, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-05-2002 11:29 PM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

10 posted 2002-06-05 11:34 PM

unbreakable Essence of Love

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