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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-05 07:43 AM


On this day of my remember
as the breeze of Spring blew softly
a child was born with eyes in glimmer
peacefully sleeping so gently

Through all the months as years passed by
where freckles came and touched an ear
Sitting and watching you grow in life
counting the days of each passing year.

You were a babe, but yet no more
as now your teens are very near
Big enough to stand, hold the door
Upon this day of your twelfth year

Once a little boy, my little man
Hair of red above shining face
You try so hard, hard as you can
to beat me in most every race

I love you Son, upon this day
of your birth so long, long ago
I wish you much, I want to say
You’re my young man, I love you so.

Happy Birthday Tim....You are now a young man...
But, in my heart....you remain that little boy...

(For my son Timothy...on his 12th Birthday...)


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-05 08:55 AM


CONGRATULATIONS BARRY ON YOUR 5000th POST!!
Where on earth has the time gone...
All those wonderful *sighs* you have given us poet sir.
Also, a Very Happy Birthday to your son Tim!!
Such a heartfelt dedication Barry..
Extremely warm and touching.
~Hugs and Best Wishes, Nancy~

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-05 09:00 AM


Good Morning Nancy....thank you...

I thought this was a moment that I should
take and make something of it...

He loved it...in his own little way,  the
typical boy....almost a man...

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-06-05 09:02 AM


Cogradulations on your 5000th post. This is a beautiful tribute to your son.
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4 posted 2002-06-05 09:03 AM


OhMagnus~
Firstly ... Happy Birthday, Tim !

Nextly ...

'where freckles came and touched an ear'

Oooooohhhh, I just LOVE this ...
What a lovely way to spend your 5000th post, Dad~
and if he'd stand still for it ...
I'd smooch those little freckles~

Just LOVE a redhead with a sprinkle of frinkles~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Martie
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5 posted 2002-06-05 09:32 AM


Barry

A boy is a treasure that will always be in your keep, no matter how old he gets.  This is very tender and lovingly wonderful for your 5000 post..congratulaions!

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6 posted 2002-06-05 09:33 AM



Ah, a Keeper...something he will
be able to pass down to his son,
seeing as how his father taught him
so very well...

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-06-05 09:48 AM


SmartChick...thanx dear lady...He is a
special young man...Maybe I can get a pic
and put it up for all to see all of those
freckles and the bluest of blue eyes...

Maybe I am a little biased...


Marge...I hope I can get a pic for you to
see this handsome young man...  Thanx and
hugs...

Martie,  WOW...I found a misspelled word...
in your reply.....Gee,  makes me feel good..
(just teasing)...Thanx dear one,  and hugs..

Karilea...YES...but I am not so sure he will
ever become a poet....Maybe....if I keep
letting him read...Well......we shall see,
won't we?  He is a trip, and a very handsome
young man...

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8 posted 2002-06-05 12:36 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, congratulations on 5000!!! YAY!!! (smiles) HAPPY BIRTHDAY WISHES TO TIMOTHY FROM US ALL!!! May he continue to grow and delight you with many special memories to hold forever, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-06-05 12:55 PM


Great write my friend...Happy B-day Tim!

5000th Huh???  at my rate you'll be at 10k before I hit 5k...

Hang in there!

jwesley

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10 posted 2002-06-05 05:02 PM


What a beautiful gift of love you've penned for your son. *S*

Happy Birthday, Tim!

And congratulations, Magnus... on a son that gives you such smiles AND the milestone. *S*

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