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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~Thanks to my friend, June, for the beautiful graphic inspiration~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Will you stop making the rest of us look like amateurs? The NERVE!!!!!  Think I like it...?  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...This is just so incredibly beautiful. I love the way you show us the perfect picture and paint your words around it. ***Ivy Rose |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this IS so good !!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is lovely! I enjoy the trees etched in black filigree against the moon or even the sunrise and sunset for that matter. Beautiful poem and picture! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is absolutely beautiful, Marge! I love the way you do this. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge This was simply exquisite. The words and picture complimented each other so well. Take care...... Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't the computer wonderful, where we can create such lovelies...this is wonderful Marge...simply Margnificient... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-03-2002 11:23 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul and writer of the night’s dance, you know I utterly utterly love this. YOU are so good at this, but then no one has your affinity to moonlight, or your ability to shape the light into jewels of written wonder. Don’t you ever take your pen out of that poetical inkwell darling heart, you are far too good to ever stop. This is simply gorgeous the flow as soft as moonlight over skin. I love it utterly utterly, and the artwork is splendid    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
OMG!!!!!!! Marge..... I can't believe the beauty! both the pic and the poem!  ~ artistic hugsLyra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when ever you are Luna inspired we can expect poetry in motion... both the poem and pic are perfect. "in silhouetted glow" ... beautiful. When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge, I enjoy what you do with your art and your images such splender |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Love your shadows of beauty.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ You each make it such a blessing to share my little thoughts~ Thank you all from the heart of this poetess~  Balladeer~ Hey you ... you're my favorite amateur~ IvyRose~ Thanks so very, very much~ OneSlickLady~ Thanks ... glad you liked it~ BettyLou~ Me too ! I just have to *hug* June for sending me this one~ I've now got Foreverly Yours, Ink in the process of being registered~  And wouldn't you know ... I spelled 'Ink' wrong on this post ! SmartieChick~ Awwwww, you're so good for me ! Thank you~ SueTang~ Thanks so very much~ Karilea~ It is ! And sharing is even better !  MarshaLove~ Ohhhhh, I don't think it'll come out ... sort of stuck-in-the-inkwell-of-life, I am ! I just UTTERLY adore you !! Lyra~ The words just seemed to follow the glow of that moon~ Thanks, sweetie~ JanetMarie~ Always, I appreciate you~ DarkStranger~ Aww, thanks very much~ Seymour~ *hugs* and *thanks* .. BIG HElPINGS OF BOTH~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-04-2002 11:16 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Michael took the words right out of my mouth ... and he better stop that, too! Marge, this is fabulous. I love it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge You should be writing inspirational cards because you always inspire me to the fullest. That picture is just too cool with your beautiful words set in it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Well ... the NERVE of him !! Thanks sweetie for thinking what you didn't say~ ETHome~ Oh, you read minds well ... I am hoping to launch a line 'soon'~ Thanks so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is AWESOME. And the photo is just amazing. That is my most loved scene, after my palm trees Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge.... You are the Lady in the Moon...Surely you know that... And I agree with 'Deer....you make the rest of us look like amateurs.... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now yassee Margie...if I had titled this poem that way, everyone wouldda thought I was writing about having my butt in a sling!!! Very nice job here sweetie... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
and another thing, could you imagine if I'd added "graphics" to my poem?...cradled moon?... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
and another thing...I thought I was your favorite amateur!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Note to Toe (tough to write since I'm ROFL): You're MY favorite, sweets... don't get greedy! LOL I love this, Marge... it's beautiful to look at, lovely to read... which rather epitomizes any collaboration of Marge and June. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...and the fabulous picture makes we wish I knew how to include artwork with my writing...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it~ Magnus~ Awwwww, you say the nicest things~ But, but ... I only do what I can do ... it takes no special talent ... honest Injun ! Toe~ LOL-ing ... when I saw THREE notifications from you in my mailbox ... I thought for sure that your server burped !!! 1. Tee-Hee ... I heard you've 'always' got your butt in a sling ! 2. Butt ... Suthern already sent me that photo ! (wasn't that the one, SuthernGal ?) 3. Whoa ! I heard YOU were a PRO ! Thank you for dropping in on my little moon-show sweetie~ Suthern~ Thanks for the priceless (unless he can be blackmailed) photo ! Thankee gal ... you checking air fares yet ? JamesMichael~ Awwww, well sweetie, until you do ... I'm pleased you enjoyed mine~ Thanks so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
"Where I wil wait in pause of phase stepping forth on next total amaze" *smiles* just how much I love this stanza. It is truly a very beautiful poem, Marge! mycafe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyCafe~ Thank you so very, very much .... I hope we'll see one from you real soon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Marge, A perfect marraige of poetry and illustration! Joe Lamando |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joe~ Thank you sooooo much~ It sure was an inspiring graphic~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhh Marge how Ive missed reading your awesome poetry, this is awesome...I hope to be back soon to read a lot more. Thanks for sharing beautiful lady ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ You've just made my day darling lady~ It is soooooooooooooo good to see you. Titia and I were just discussing via e-mail how we've missed you~ Hope you will find a moment to share one of your LOVELY Tanka's with us~ *Hugs* ... BIG *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge What splendor!! You, and the moon! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsMartieMoon~ You KNOW I love the glow of you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awww didn't espect that anyone would miss me at least, hope to be back soon, with or without tankas or other stuff...lol...if I ever could find that muse of me ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well MsCharisma~ I think you'll find that MANY of us have missed you and your beautiful pieces of poetry~ Love you gal~ Good to have you home~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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