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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-05 07:29 AM


Still

She told me
she loves me still.
Ooh I'm so
delighted.
Wouldn't you be
if the woman
you loved forever
told you these words
and got you all
excited.

JamesLee
June05
2002


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1 posted 2002-06-05 07:57 AM


Most duh duh duh duh definitely.....

OH YESSSSS...

Nicely done JM...

Joe Lamando
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2 posted 2002-06-05 08:13 AM


JM
Short but sweet
For love heaven sent
A few grateful words
are well spent

Joe Lamando

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3 posted 2002-06-05 01:52 PM




(smiles) Oh yes, oh yes, we are all soooooo happy for you, sweet James, I dream of being with my Joanna forever and every time she smiles, I always feel happy too! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-05 04:30 PM


perhaps. . . but, then again. . .

I see that you are. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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