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0 posted 2002-06-04 10:55 PM



on a swing
we let go

flow

time drops
dissolving
indolent
shilly shally

gigglin glee
fully free
invigorated
we are me's

friendship's slumber
bubbled in comfort
twinkling talks
fond folly

deep discussions
of soul's percussion
clarity shouts
we know what we're about
(inspired by calvin)


© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-05 01:55 AM


Smiling at this, your heart is flying in the air on swing.
"gigglin glee
fully free
invigorated
we are me's"


GOlDsparklESS
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2 posted 2002-11-14 12:12 PM


calvin's dumb.  
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3 posted 2002-11-14 12:13 PM


just like this piece of crap.  
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4 posted 2002-12-31 02:22 AM


a special bond indeed
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5 posted 2002-12-31 12:31 PM


hehehe, oops. i was in a bad mood at the time.  me and calvin are friends foreva!  and this poem is like, totally awesome.  
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