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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-04 02:42 PM

As we lie side by side,
sharing the early morning sounds,
the soft sunlight,
we harken back to last night
and you ask, “how do you feel me?”
I reply, “with the fingertips of my soul.”
You ask, “how do you love me?”
I reply, “passionately, ardently, and tenderly.”
Last night a wonderful, sensual time
when all of our senses
experienced overload.
There is time for one more
sensory overload.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-04 02:45 PM

Oh there's always time for one more of those!
Great title.....love the way you brought your feelings to life in poet's language.....
Clever writing...I enjoyed!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-06-04 02:47 PM

You're making it very difficult to turn this thing off and go to work...lol!

I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto

Lifehouse

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-04 02:59 PM

DANG RIGHT THERE'S TIME!!!
Oops, sorry got a little excited there

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and you ask, “how do you feel me?”
I reply, “with the fingertips of my soul.”
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*SIGH*
Lucky lucky woman she is!!!
THIS is SO darn good!
WOW!!
~Hugs YOU~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-06-04 03:26 PM

I reply, "with the fingertips of my soul."
You ask, "how do you love me?"
I reply, "passionately, ardently, and tenderly."
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oh yeah...Im thinking those "soul fingertips" are making time stand still.

Have you been in the raspberry tea? *L*
lovely romantic phrasing and intend here poet sir...an intimate, tender moment captured in verse ... someone was doing some sighing

When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-06-04 04:02 PM

I just love a man that knows the RIGHT answers.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-06-04 04:04 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it! (sigh) This is soooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I just know your love will love this forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-06-04 04:23 PM

Interloper...

Very nicely done!

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