Open Poetry #20 |
Be Careful |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Be Careful At some point you have to realize you don't have any control over that. Perhaps then you can let go. If not. Be careful. For that over which you have no control will try it's hardest to take you to a place where you won't want to go. JamesLee June03 2002 |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Yes, James, be careful... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very true James. ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh James, such wisdom and truth flows from your pen, sweet friend, yes, it helps always to be aware and to be cautious before taking a step on that kind of foreign ground to our intentions! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
James, you got that right in this piece of work, we surely have to be careful! I love this Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wisdom of the ages here! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi James. This is true! Like the old cliche' "Be careful what you wish for you just might get it" or something like that! Thanks |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Hi James, I'm a control freak myself and often find myself wandering aimlessly with great anxiety.I appreciate the thoughts expressed so admirably in your poem. Thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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