Love's light hides behind the clouds of circumstance

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Open Poetry #20

Love's light hides behind the clouds of circumstance

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-06-04 02:59 AM

Then I whispered...

Can she soar, love?
Tell me, can she fly?

Then it is you who brings hermore pain...For I am just a girl whose in love with you...

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-04 03:05 AM

I love the way your mind works.

and yes...it's true what you write. I like the whatzdawoid here? I like the conundrum of the perplexity, of being in love with someone who loves a being on a pedestal...very few words you write, but? I read much into it...and if I'm wrong? grin..let me be, I LIKE IT THIS WAY.

nice...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-06-04 05:48 AM

Very nice...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-04 11:35 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I hope everything works out in the end, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always and I know love is destined to fill your heart with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

4 posted 2002-06-04 03:54 PM

the title drew me in so quick, for i know it is a truth.

these types are my favorite. conveying a most powerful message in such a short verse, but with so much thought... it gets better the more you read it.
what a talent.

the clouds aren't such a bad place to wait. it's comfy. i never waited there.

no pun intended, but just rain on your love's parade, hit 'em with lightning, and make them come to their senses. hehehe

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

[This message has been edited by MidnightSon (06-04-2002 03:57 PM).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-06-04 03:55 PM

Short, sad, heart wretching piece.....well done!

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