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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-06-04 12:56 PM




Goodnight
I may dream of you
my head upon a solitary pillow
if I do
if you are there
sleeping deeply in my dreams
in my arms
sleep well
and know that
you will wake
loved
I may dream of you


I'm falling even more in love with you
Letting go of all I've held onto

Lifehouse

[This message has been edited by Duncan (06-04-2002 01:21 AM).]

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TriXter
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The One
1 posted 2002-06-04 12:58 PM


Loved the poem, i feel it as i feel the same way about somone at the moment, whitch MOST of my posts are about ( not my last one...) but this is a beautiful poem and i enjoyed it

The man of few words...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-06-04 01:10 AM


Now that is a lover's lullaby. Sweet dreams, to both of you.
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-04 01:53 AM


Lovely poem, Duncan....
sweet dreams
~sleepy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2002-06-04 07:10 AM


You sure do know how to put a smile on a girls face darlin…no wonder I slept so well last night!! I always did love this one…isn’t it nice to wake loved??

Everything is possible in the game of life
    (Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-06-04 07:23 AM


Oh Duncan ... this was just beautiful. I loved your thoughts in this ... much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-06-04 08:33 AM


in my arms
sleep well
and know that
you will wake
loved
======================

*sigh*
what more could any one hope for...


(digging your new sig too)

When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-06-04 08:41 AM


Love this Duncan!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Elan
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State of Wide Eye
8 posted 2002-06-04 09:16 AM



...Sleeping deeply in my dreams...

such a lovely thought...

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-06-04 10:21 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always share the sweetest dreams with love close to your heart happily! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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