Open Poetry #20 |
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Unprepared |
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ULookSoPrecious Junior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 16NC, U.S.A. |
UNPREPARED Purposely holding for just a moment longer This under-rated feeling has left me shaking, shivering in place. Touching your skin is like walking a wire, I have to keep moving. Over curves and slants, I slide effortlessly across smooth terrain. Whispering breaths along your ribcage, feeling your chest rise and rise. I hear you gasp, signaling the fall and I guide you safely down to rest. Slick and sweet, your body shines. Your face red, your hair disheveled, {You're so beautiful.} I can taste the air, humid and damp, surrounding us like a fog. Purposely I hold on for just a moment longer because this under-rated feeling has left me vulnerable and bare. -Kristen "Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Kristen, this is such a beautfully bittersweet poem, sweet friend, always follow your heart and I know the time will be right when you are prepared and ytou will be touched by the most beautiful love you deserve so much! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
Kristen Breathtaking. This is so good! Jim Sullivan |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
Your words are so precious! a great write, a great blend of emotions here. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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ULookSoPrecious Junior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 16NC, U.S.A. |
Thanks! I really appreciate the comments. ![]() Kris "Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings |
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