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0 posted 2002-06-03 02:30 AM



You think life is just is,
Does such a possibility exist?
I wonder if I live for today
Hope you understand
That tomorrow never matters,
The world moves on each day,
But one day it will end,
Can you promise me the future?
Not ten or twenty down the line,
The promise of the next day.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

© Copyright 2002 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-03 12:02 PM


I used to live life like there was no tomorrow...and quite often? I came too close to not having a today, for being rash in my yesterdays...for now? I just pretend there is a tomorrow--how can I have grown old if time does not exist? (izzis making sense?)

Enjoyed--and sorry, sometimes my mind just warps into some other dimension!

"sometimes forever should only last a few years..."

--Sharon


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2 posted 2002-06-03 03:23 PM


Like this...James
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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ronil, this is soooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I believe the best way to approach each day is to live each day like there is no tomorrow and pretend tomorrow doesn't exist and letting the smiles and joys repeat themselves and fill us with everlasting memories you keep forever, even when we know tomorrow is promised! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-03-2002 09:11 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-06-03 11:07 PM


Yesterday is history...
Tomorrow is uncertain..
Today is a gift..
That's why they call it the present..

like your style

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5 posted 2002-06-03 11:28 PM


You guys spoil me with your lovely comments. THank you. You are my inspirations to keep writing poems.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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