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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I need yr Calgarian sunlight. I need yr taste across my face. I need you like a cardboard sunset. We trip over the strings in our grace. I need yr empty arms around me, filling us both up with the stars. I need to kiss yr eyelined corners. Over here there's just too many cars. I need yr rain upon the window. I need yr scissors to cut out. The shape is malformed in my tremble. But it comes out. I need you like a cardboard sunset. I need to get all loosened in the strings. We tie up all our regret worries. And for a moment seem to capture wings. I just wanted you to know that I just wanted you to know. And I just wanted you to know that I just wanted you to know. She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your need and your want...I understand... you are back? hugsssssss and  glad to see you M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Such a deep yearning fills these words, sweet friend, I love the ending, it is wonderful and I just love how it curves around between you and who you're speaking to, I love it, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mike darling boy this is wonderful writing it simply speaks to my soul. Often your writing is exquisite and this is superb, truly speaking writing, it converses with a soul. Outstanding darling heart it is outstanding and I love it utterly. Welcome back Mike I’ve missed you, x x x Mushy blows a kiss    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this, and understand. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Mike I've missed you're poems...this one longs...and breathes. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I just wanted you to know that I just wanted you to know. And I just wanted you to know that I just wanted you to know Hey Squirrel...where ya been? Not that I've been around much myself. Is it very scary that I understand this poem completely?!?! I'm falling even more in love with you |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
goes together with "the paper moon"..these titles intrigue me..good to read you [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-03-2002 11:55 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I need you like a cardboard sunset. I need to get all loosened in the strings. We tie up all our regret worries. And for a moment seem to capture wings. This is so lovely, Mr.Squirrel... I hope you had a good time and I'm glad to see you back.  ~ welcome back hugsLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I took the scissors cutting edge and made the jagged beautiful I took a knife and carved a ledge I sawed the yearning, dutiful... splendor rays that reach to none slendor days reach no one arms that reach eternity a sun down's dance upon the beach... (missed ya love)  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Vulnerable now aren't we Mike???  This was truly you sweets...enjoyed Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad y' all enjoyed. And thanks for the poem-back, Sen. I'm exhausted.... Much love to you all. She said burn ... together. |
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