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Take Me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I offer you eternal love with liquid gold, I touch your lips champagne in ruby crystal glass Our chance to sway and twirl and dip. My hand outstretched to gather stars unto my breast, to give to you a fire which simmers in my soul such love to fill your heart anew. Take all of me, for I am yours forevermore was meant to be and as you hold my open heart we dance into eternity. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always grace these pages! (kiss on cheek) I wish this happiness to come true for you, sweet friend, you deserve it so very much! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Take all of me, for I am yours forevermore was meant to be and as you hold my open heart we dance into eternity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lovely Sandra...enjoyed so much! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Our chance to sway and twirl and dip. He'd be a fool to resist! Enjoyed this one from you Sandra~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a wonderful rhythm and flow to this piece Sandra, beautiful sentiments, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very romantic catalinamoon...James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Where fantasy meets reality...took me back. I really liked this, Sandra. Made me feel good. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Such Passion.... no pun intended... I adored this piece.... it was gorgeous.... even a bit etherial. I had to add as well.... larger than life... as I read this a second time... (I don't often do that) I could picture the swirling of galaxies within your eager grasp....handed to the man you love.. Well done!! Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (04-08-2002 12:34 AM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
catalinamoon, You words flow so pretty I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I think you are on a roll! I'm gonna like this...great job. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sandra - nice to see one away from the sadness. Liked this, and I love to dance... BC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! I love this! Well done! May I have the next dance |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, How could this offer ever be neglected! *BUMP* It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And dance you shall, because the band has started to play once again, and the song is just for you!!!!!  The music is playing...the dance begins |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have regretfully missed something while I was away .... .... how much for a dance? (I have got to run to the bank!!) In simple words ... BEAUTIFUL! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sandra, my friend, this is outstanding and the imagery just lovely. Michael |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
"Take all of me, for I am yours forevermore was meant to be" I love that part! This is really good. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Catalinamoon...EXQUISITE POETICS!!!! Beauty radiates from your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beneath the shimmer of night's star in bask of moon's glowing in shine dancing in swirl to each soft bar hair flowing each twirl so fine Beautiful Poem Sandra....very lovely and happy..... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Just gorgeous. You, and the poem Sandra. Your writing has such a solid sound to it, such distinction and I am always pleased to read it, to know it, your thoughts, and feelings. Please check your snail? mail this coming week. *Peace and hugs, for all that you are dealing with and too, for this lovely write. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yes, this is gorgeous writing, I just love it!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Take all of me, for I am yours forevermore was meant to be and as you hold my open heart we dance into eternity. I just read this again...and got something completely different from it than the first time. Maybe it's just a state of mind lately. (Hey, if 'you know who' doesn't see this, can I 'borrow' it and tell her I wrote it?) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
very inviting poem, and who can say no?much enjoyed! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, loved this poem lots, just beautiful. Sincerely Rick It gave me some nspiration !!! Love from heart is always true On moment’s wing of time Will love of truth be always there? To meld your heart with mine I’d hold the thorns of roses For their beauty you to give If love was true forever In love we’d always live |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi everyone, thanks for reading this, and your kind words. I liked your poem, Rick, very much. And Duncan, go for it, I won't tell if you won't S |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sandra, have missed your words much, and this is the perfect example of why. Oh and girl I just love your new picture! Hugs sweet cat. Like a red brick, |
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