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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you smiled prayers to my hand words when I took you to dark moon place you wore your dream slick gown and made sigh song poems for my listen the sand people threw their art arrows you caught them with your eye hands and made your mouth shape empty with throat singer voice night was your reward for dreaming days you hurry foot danced to be there I held your hand in my gloving under leather you were hidden I proclaimed your bad woman regal you wanted to be wicked then your virgin skin wore blush stories I fed your mind my tantra bread your morning was musk with dry mouth rain ©Dark |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Your eyes sense amazing sights and words bubble in thrill... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very unique, well penned ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deca, you are naughty nice with your slice of review sighs thanks lady trac'ee, thanks for the wave and words I appreciate you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you smiled prayers to my hand words when I took you to dark moon place you wore your dream slick gown and made sigh song poems for my listen ==================================== I fed your mind my tantra bread your morning was musk with dry mouth rain ================================= ya had me from the title on this one DS... this is one sigh sky write  that last line is cooler than cool.  Cant stand up for fallin apart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark, to love tantra bread is to know how to live... and love. this one is oh sooo special. ~morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS Something about leather is so warm inside. Enjoyed this! Wave at you across the fog air blanket. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janet marie, thanks for your touches babe, it is always a pleasure to have your comments grace my efforts enchantress, yes...perhaps that feast would satiate us all...thanks lady ms martie, she is lovely this am...morning in her gown of myst with no sun under..thanks for the read babe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Dark,I always feel somewhat overwhelmed with the sensuality and power of your words. You have a distinctive and amazing writing style. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The way you put words together makes English feel like a second language to me...spare, but vivid and just enough space to languish in...mmmm...yummmy. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sandra, most humble thanks lady, I am pleased that you feel my words, ,and I hope they are always comfortable.. Serene1, thanks for reading my funnyfit words, they just seem to get together that way..like they meet at a lounge and spend the rest of the night friendly. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
regal the sight, leather-cloaked huntress in dreams of submission, the moon shields her heart... the wind carries her cries Indigo |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You do inspire... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
indigo... now wait, she has on this really short vicky secret thingy and I have on the leather chaps and little whip.. spank you very much!!! thanks lady |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, you whet my expressions thank you ms for your touches |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'you smiled prayers to my hand words when I took you to dark moon place you wore your dream slick gown and made sigh song poems for my listen the sand people threw their art arrows you caught them with your eye hands and made your mouth shape empty with throat singer voice' The way you word things is absolutely unique...makes the reader take a second look at what you're talking about...excellent write, DS! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you always make your dreams seem so beyond four-dimensional and reveal the eyes and ears of all the body and in emotions! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ You are something else ... This is some kinda wonderful~ almost vanilla~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger How high the moon? Enjoyed |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love strolling through your dappled word forest. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Snowpants thanks for the reads and replys, much appreciattion Noah, bless you sir, thanks Marge slow hugs lady, for your smiles Sy, arrigoto my friend, I have no clue how high it is, but somedays it is sleeve close phachi, thanks lady for the reads and warm words, bless you |
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