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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-06-03 05:59 AM

you smiled prayers to my hand words
when I took you to dark moon place
you wore your dream slick gown
and made sigh song poems for my listen

the sand people threw their art arrows
you caught them with your eye hands
and made your mouth shape empty
with throat singer voice

night was your reward for dreaming days
you hurry foot danced to be there
I held your hand in my gloving
under leather you were hidden

I proclaimed your bad woman regal
you wanted to be wicked then
your virgin skin wore blush stories
I fed your mind my tantra bread

your morning was musk with dry mouth rain

©Dark

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2002-06-03 06:39 AM

Your eyes sense
amazing sights
and words bubble
in thrill...

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2002-06-03 07:02 AM

very unique, well penned

~HUGS~ Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-06-03 07:51 AM

deca, you are naughty nice
with your slice of review sighs
thanks lady

trac'ee, thanks for the wave and words
I appreciate you

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-06-03 08:16 AM

you smiled prayers to my hand words
when I took you to dark moon place
you wore your dream slick gown
and made sigh song poems for my listen
====================================

I fed your mind my tantra bread

your morning was musk with dry mouth rain
=================================

ya had me from the title on this one DS...
this is one sigh sky write

that last line is cooler than cool.

Cant stand up for fallin apart
Cant see through this veil across my heart, over you-
Youll always be the one.
You were the first, youll be the last

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-06-03 09:11 AM

Dark,
to love tantra bread
is to know how to live...
and love.
this one is
oh sooo special.
~morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-06-03 09:39 AM

Good Morning, DS

Something about leather is so warm inside. Enjoyed this! Wave at you across the fog air blanket.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-06-03 10:30 AM

janet marie, thanks for your touches babe, it is always a pleasure to have your comments grace my efforts

enchantress, yes...perhaps that feast would satiate us all...thanks lady

ms martie, she is lovely this am...morning in her gown of myst with no sun under..thanks for the read babe

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-06-03 11:15 AM

Dark,I always feel somewhat overwhelmed with the sensuality and power of your words. You have a distinctive and amazing writing style.
Sandra

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2002-06-03 11:47 AM

The way you put words together makes English feel like a second language to me...spare, but vivid and just enough space to languish in...mmmm...yummmy.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-06-03 11:51 AM

Sandra, most humble thanks lady, I am pleased that you feel my words, ,and I hope they are always comfortable..

Serene1, thanks for reading my funnyfit words, they just seem to get together that way..like they meet at a lounge and spend the rest of the night friendly.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

11 posted 2002-06-03 02:10 PM

regal the sight,
leather-cloaked huntress
in dreams of submission,
the moon shields her heart...
the wind carries her cries

Indigo

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

12 posted 2002-06-03 02:16 PM

You do inspire...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-06-03 02:16 PM

indigo...
now wait, she has on this really short
vicky secret thingy and I have on the
leather chaps and little whip..
spank you very much!!! thanks lady

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2002-06-03 02:17 PM

ms noir,
you whet my expressions
thank you ms for your touches

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

15 posted 2002-06-03 06:50 PM

'you smiled prayers to my hand words
when I took you to dark moon place
you wore your dream slick gown
and made sigh song poems for my listen

the sand people threw their art arrows
you caught them with your eye hands
and made your mouth shape empty
with throat singer voice'

The way you word things is absolutely unique...makes the reader take a second look at what you're talking about...excellent write, DS!

sp

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

16 posted 2002-06-03 07:42 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you always make your dreams seem so beyond four-dimensional and reveal the eyes and ears of all the body and in emotions! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2002-06-03 08:02 PM

DarkStranger~
You are something else ...

This is some kinda wonderful~

almost vanilla~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2002-06-03 08:30 PM

Dark Stranger
How high the moon? Enjoyed

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

19 posted 2002-06-03 10:30 PM

I love strolling through your dappled word forest.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

20 posted 2002-06-04 06:01 AM

Snowpants
thanks for the reads and replys, much appreciattion

Noah, bless you sir, thanks

Marge slow hugs lady, for your smiles

Sy, arrigoto my friend, I have no clue how high it is, but somedays it is sleeve close

phachi, thanks lady for the reads and warm words, bless you

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