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Deep thoughts of love
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Deep thoughts of love |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I’m busy but my days do lack that something that I need I’ve slowly turned unhappy since my flowers turned to weed My heart was once so overjoyed with what I now call youth The years have passed, the times have changed and now there’s just the truth My body’s changed with attitude; each quest now seems so great The dreams I had for future years, I think will come too late I feel my body draining of the patience it once had I tend to delve now deep within, through good times and the bad I know not of my feelings, but I know that they exist A life fulfilled with fairytales, the goodbyes must have kissed So what will fill the void I feel, for pain I cannot wreak? What will heal this broken heart, when all its strength is weak? They say that time does heal each wound, but can well create And heartache slowly takes its toll, until it’s just too late So only prayers and calls of hope and hiding from the fact Can make each day more bearable and living just an act Till something comes to change it, to bring my heart its peace Then from the feelings hidden deep, I’ll find some just release |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Rick,I am sending long distance hugs. I know just this feeling. And I have no idea how to make it better. Sandra |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thanks for the reply Sandra, we must all change as the years go by, as must our expectations, the person once has disappeared and the other has changed. Sincerely Rick |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Rick, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your tears and time may not help, but know we all love you so much and love will always find a way! (sad sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Rick I thoroughly enjoyed reading this beautifully rhymed philosophical ramble. Filled with sage reflections and also the yearning of heart! Good work!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do not think you are alone in these feelings, and the fact that you have come to acknowledge them, shows greater growth than you might imagine, just now. Yes, Rick...so many of us know exactly what you are saying. I would like to say it will get better, soon, but it will all be determined on how you decide to work within your own mind... my prayers are with you... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you are not alone here, as love runs deep, so do thoughts such as these..well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick, And isn't that the truth. Well done enjoyed. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Rick, this speaks to me in volumes! I can certainly relate. well done my friend. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick Your words are always so heartfelt and written from the kindest of souls. I hope you find the love you deserve. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I like the way you’ve written this piece. very reflective and self searching. I know not of my feelings, but I know that they exist A life fulfilled with fairytales, the goodbyes must have kissed Love those two lines especially. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
It just makes me so mad thinking about how there are so many people like us that have been hurt and feel like this. thx for sharing though. There's a peace inside us all |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
My dear friends, thank you all for your wonderful replies, each is heart felt. I enjoy the company of you all and your support. Be well all of you!! Sincerely Rick |
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