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Tale of Woe
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Tale of Woe |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wrong to stir the past by opening doors best left closed just to experience again what I thought I used to know~ What I thought... It was true enough I'd loved you so much that even the admission of it now hurts as much as it did when you said good bye You questioned once the validity of it all, too much, too soon, too little, too late and honor had to prevail leaving my world to slowly unravel I know I shouldn't have waited for as long as I did, hoping in vain but my heart insisted & I was powerless against it... I'd even dealt myself a fatal blow in an effort to hurt you succeeding in only pushing you further away Don't you see? you were everything I'd ever wanted~ flaws included if only I were patient just a little longer... But it was too late even before it began, it was too late... so I stumble over this earnest apology much in the same manner that I'd stumbled over love never promised... please, forgive me... ~R.T. 6/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...stumbled over love never promised... a very, very good write, Tier... |
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ULookSoPrecious Junior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 16NC, U.S.A. |
Wow...Very very nice. It made me tear up and believe me, that's a hard thing to do. Thanks for sharing this. It really is great. Take Care, Kris "Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'But it was too late even before it began, it was too late... so I stumble over this earnest apology much in the same manner that I'd stumbled over love never promised...' Love this verse in its truth and its expression...quite a powerful penning...excellent write, Tier... sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Tiersdin, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this no longer apllies to you and now love has granted you a guarantted admission that's fair! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, it's all we can do. . . sad and from the heart my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It seems to be written somewhere that this is going to happen to the majority somewhere along the line of life.........This is a real heartbreaker RT Good write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have been feeling very similar feelings myself lately...over something long past but still alive in my memory....James |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
this is truly a beautiful write, and even heartfelt too. mycafe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tier.. WE ALL make mistakes that seem to stick around and nudge us from time to time.. Hopefully your's will understand... hopefully you can understand as well.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you all so much for your warm and sincere comments. It means more than I can ever say... Love, R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow. Do you know how many years I lived this?? You put the love, the longing, in words. I hope I never have to revisit that place. Well written Tier. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It sure isn't easy to recover from love stumbles. Hugs, best wishes on your journey through recovery. |
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