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The Crystal Bubble |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Peace inside The gentle ripple on the calm sea Easing in the rocking motion As Daylight breaks The shadows lifted in a blur of glee Bathing earth in get-up potion When evening falls The cloaked disguise of night in ebony Wrapped within a sleepy notion An attitude as deep as any ocean The antidote to all commotion Inner glide Copyright Kkh 6/2/02 |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
i liked this poem alot i almost wanted to use it for my lit homework but i had to use one from a classic poet. if i cld write like you i would be very blessed i like your style of writing |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When evening falls The cloaked disguise of night in ebony Wrapped within a sleepy notion Very beautiful, Kathleen.... I love your imagery and use of words here.  ~ evening hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, this is superb...Like how you wrote it in distinct parts...each playing off the other part... Nice write...very nice.. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
so much of our character runs like the periods of the day..interesting  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My goodness, I enjoyed your glide and the sleepy notion, not to mention all the commotion! It's a wrap all the way around. Nice writing~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and inner peace resides... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could certainly use a little of that get-up potion once in a while..... As always you are smooth as silk, Diamond lady  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Guess I missed this the first time around...my loss! Beautiful, haunting (to my mind anyway ((not in a spectral way)) ) write. jwesley |
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