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The Drama Box
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The Drama Box |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Drama box set as a bench collected artists there to fence in the middle of a homeless run Marcus runs away, his confidence undone. He needed love from his father knew he had to protect his mother felt short changed because dad abandoned left him to face life second handed. Drama box moved to another position Marcus ran to find consolation a homeless man offered him a thought that life's lessons are hard taught. he broke from tradition armed with new munition his life synched with a drama box set on stage all life's woes what a rage! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-02-2002 07:43 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Martin, this is sooooo very sad, sweet friend, it saddens me to see so much drama in this world and parents not satisfying the needs for their children and offering them the love they deserve so much! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with much of the youth of the world, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
a homeless man offered him a thought that life's lessons are hard taught. Its amazing how many really good philosphers are homeless... I really enjoyed the poem, Martin ~dramatic homeless philosophical hugsLyra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very thoughtful write, I appreciate what you say here.. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Interesting work here. The drama and the box... neither has a home, does it? Always a pleasure to read you. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, some children face the street because of parental divisions, unfortunately. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Lyra, yes and some well educated people burn out and end up as vagabonds...their stories go unnoticed! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sandra, this is inspired by a play called Education of a Poet  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Diamond, That Drama box too is just that cube used to create a minimalistic setting on stage..it can be used as a table or chair...so true that family dramas sometimes throw kids to the streets idem for the cartons we use for moving! |
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