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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Silk threads woven intricately into a web following no pattern unique in it's shape a delicate strength extending beneath the eaves kept from escaping outside of the elements caught in between careful not to come undone tricky around the edges tentative movements withdrawing where it gets sticky pulled back towards the middle silk threads that tighten the web fanning out in circumference keeping me centered after so many others tried tearing me down... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully woven, Lori... Its amazing how you can take something so mundane as a spiderweb and turn it into a beautiful poem.  ~ spooky hugs Lyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Lori! It is amazing the beautiful patterns they weave... and just how strong they are. Well done. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Blues A spider's web is an amazing thing...I love this look at one, and the metaphor to other parts of life. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I just love this Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ This is absolutely stunning in thought~ Love it ... and will be back for another and another read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) YAY!!! Oh Lori, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love spider webs so so much and am envious of how they can always create such gorgeous works of art with soft tiny threads and work with so much patience! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Love the web you have woven with this one Lorie…particularly the last lines Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I got some leather straps and some silk ropes ...hint hint enjoyed it bluezy, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful write Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's not always easy holding it together but I'm finding the strength in my weekness. Thanks to each of you for reading me, I appreciate it very much!!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your essence is silk..that is what makes us females sooo strong..we just forget that when we are treated like twine strang sometimes.. I really enjoyed this.. Sincerely, Reg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for that Regina~ A ball of twine we women are not, to be let out and reeled in on a whim. Hmmmmph! So nice of you to stop by.Thanks again~ |
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