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Martie

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0 posted 2002-06-01 10:28 PM

          Place Where Sigh is Born

There is a place where sigh is born,
for me it came from childhood,  yes,
just at the line between love and trust,
the rocking chair stopped my heart with touch.

The play came so easy, all cuddled and warm,
leaving laughter warn like old lace adorn
on a girl misplaced, this step my heart took
for someone I mistook.

The sigh lasts awhile, I know you see,
for it was born on loving knee gone wrong,
around a lit room of dark wood canopy
a spell of forlorn was given to me.

So, I tell my heart be still,
you are as lovely as the song you sing,
but sometimes I don’t listen to me,
the words are flat,  the touch unreal
and still a cave of darkness I feel.

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2002-06-01 10:35 PM

YAY!!! Oh Martie, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe childhood is the most magical time of all for innocence and sighs to shine, though I believe that magic will always shine in us all! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

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2 posted 2002-06-01 10:37 PM

Martie~

Feel the love ...

'you are as lovely as the song you sing'

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Severn
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3 posted 2002-06-01 10:43 PM

Yes, Martie. I know - I understand and how I feel this.

Thanks for your concern and love today btw...it's really appreciated, and thanks for your poetry...it makes me feel understand lol, if I may so selfishly.

Ah - but that is why you are my poetic counterpart..

huggles

K

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-01 11:12 PM

Martie...this is incredibly written...
and yet left me feeling somewhat sad.
~Hugs sweet poetess~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (06-02-2002 12:02 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

5 posted 2002-06-01 11:56 PM

Another incredibly gorgeous write, Martie...

~ sighing hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ShadowRider
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6 posted 2002-06-02 02:02 AM

awwww Martie. surely that experience that took the naivity
shall come back to you someday. It takes the right person
not just to love
but to love BACK, and understand.

the place where sighs are born
are the holes in our life
that need filling.

huggg jeff

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-06-02 08:57 AM

Your quiet speaks volumes,
I will always be listening...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-06-02 09:31 AM

Martie,
A sigh, is a sigh, is a sigh.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-06-02 11:37 AM

I feel a serious sigh coming on.
This is good, Martie.
Sandra

ethome
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10 posted 2002-06-02 11:46 AM

Martie the only sigh I can inject here is a sigh of pleasure when I read your poetry!
The last verse is where I reassure you that you're right....I know many things happen in this experience called life but truly, you're as lovely as the song(s) you sing!!

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

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Arkansas

11 posted 2002-06-02 12:08 PM

Ahh, Martie, very gentle smile..the cave of darkness can always be lit by the warmth of the candle your words always put out to all of us..

Martie

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12 posted 2002-06-02 02:17 PM

Noah--sometimes innocence is taken from a child..my sigh referral..but thanking you always for your loving support.

Marge--If you say so, it must be true..thanks, sis!

Kamla--Huggles back to you!

Nancy--Yes, it is sad somewhat, like life is sometimes. Thanks for looking with you sweet heart.

Lyra--Thank you for your sighing hugs.

Jeff--You could be right...thanks for your thinking and caring words.

Karilea--Thanks for your listening ears!

Sy--I say a sigh is often Sy.

Sandra--I have heard a few of them. Hugs!

Eric--Awww, you sure know how to make special!

Logan--So good to see you, dear friend...you light my cave with your sweet words!

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-06-03 10:05 AM

Like Nancy Lee, I was left with a sad feeling. That, however, is in no way a reflection on your superior word weaving

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2002-06-04 03:27 PM

I understand this all too well, Martie... and wish it was just a beautifully written poem that no one ever experienced.

you are as lovely as the song you sing,

Yes... you are.

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