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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-01 04:03 PM

I Am

do I dance
across your sky?
so high
at times shy
when blue cry
why?
oh why?
can you touch
the wind
or a star?
is it not
as real so far?
I don’t know
the schedule
of the journey
of destiny’s plan
all I know
is this…
I am
I AM
yes.
I am

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-06-02 12:33 PM

I really like that ending. Lots to think of in this deceptively 'simple' poem.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-06-02 12:35 PM

hey lady slick...love the new pic

and? your title reminded me of an old challenge, that I think is time for a re-hash!

lovely, YOU

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-06-02 12:59 PM

I don’t know
the schedule
of the journey
of destiny’s plan
all I know
is this…
I am

Wow!!!!!
I really love this one, Helen...Do you really think that destiny actually has a timetable...and if so...is it somewhere online?

~ destiny hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-02 01:45 PM

YAY!!! Wow, I love this, sweet friend, yes, we may not know what destiny holds us but we are capable of holding destiny close to all our hearts always! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-06-02 01:50 PM

Yes you are and I'm glad you are....Just you! Enjoyable!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-06-02 06:18 PM

As you should be!!

I liked the question you posed
about dancing acoss the sky?
That is a lovely thought~

There is no limit to the sky and
how we choose to see it.

Nice~

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