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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What I Saw You mirrored me in eyes of light it must have been me smiling for all I saw were your teeth stretched lips curved up cheekbones tanning pink underneath yes, my love, you mirrored me well… |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, may you and your love forever reflect one anothers heart with happiness to share forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely write! I enjoyed the read very much! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is excellent, reminds me of a picture I once saw...with the most awesome smile... |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...yes, my love, you mirrored me well…..." This line did it! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you express these thoughts, Lady in White especially the way you do it with such economy of words....I could never do that.... I always use too many words..... ~ smiling hugsLyra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
... I have nothing to say except - I know this, and yet I don't. Sigh. Thanks for this Lady.  K |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
yes, my love, you mirrored me well… ----------------------- Exquisite Lady! *smiling at you here* ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady darling girl, I’m smiling this is simply perfect, brevity and flow what could be better? Nothing you’ve written this perfectly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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