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Semi Cracked
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I am a glass of ruby tint still usable, but semi cracked A tear runs through the heart of me growing larger with each nights' lack. The crimson wine still holds within though litle drops are leaking through you yet may sip, but take it slow it could be that your lips turn blue. Each time you push me out of reach the crack grows just a little more But I will not completely break not even thrown onto the floor. I am a glass which yearns to toast to happiness and love that's real however, if I'm put away this crack in me may never heal. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are a wonderful vessel that will never be put away  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! I really like this one. I'm putting it away on a safe shelf, but it will not get ignored. Well done, Sandra! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sandra It would be a sad day if you were put away. However, we all know that's not going to happen so write on in peace and happiness! This is great reading! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I love your mind, my friend, as well as your heart. Beautiful write. jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I know the feeling... do you think crazy glue works on these kind of cracks...hugs, my friend....Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
FANTASTIC!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I too am an optimistic person usually but I too desire love so much and without it, I know how you feel! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, love will always find a way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A toast to you, Sandra...this poem is a beauty  ~ a wineglass full of hugsLyra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh...such melancholy - it's like wine... huggles  K |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Someone like you will not be put away for long I can see, this is filled with hope and need together... a two things that work well together  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"I am a glass which yearns to toast to happiness and love that's real however, if I'm put away this crack in me may never heal." Excellent ending to an excellent poem! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I am a glass which yearns to toast to happiness and love that's real however, if I'm put away Saw and loved the title earlier, been a busy day. Sandra...this entire poem rocks! Desperate for changing |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
i understand this on a personal level. it makes it hard to comment on the poem times like this. thank you esclandre Je le Rêve, je Pleure |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
Your words come through with a cautioning, but beautiful tone. Jim Sullivan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra darling girl this was as usual for you utterly utterly wonderful. Do you know how utterly beautiful this poem is? The style is pure you, breathtakingly lovely and the execution is without doubt one of your finest ever. You always manage to write emotion and description so well. I’m simply stunned I love it utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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