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paladin
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0 posted 2002-05-31 02:40 PM


Student

Very tough courses
Thick books heavy with Latin
Long hours in the morgue


Intern

Never enough sleep
Studing patients in lage groups
Watch operations


Oath

Spoke in solemn tones
Centurys of doctors have said
Sworn to help mankind


M.D.

Holds life in their hands
Noble warrior against death
Can you help me Doc


Hospital

Temple of healing
A place of birth and dieing
Bad food and high fees


Morgue

We all end up here
Tag on our toe on a slab
Donate your organs


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Toerag
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1 posted 2002-05-31 02:45 PM


Have Poem Will Travel...Paladin....well written...Tag on Toe?...Hmmm...interesting....Rag on Toe?...Hmmm...that's me?....
paladin
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2 posted 2002-05-31 02:51 PM


Thanks toerag."Have a challege theme?wire Palidin".

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3 posted 2002-05-31 03:05 PM


I like the way you show an entire life in snapshots... well done, Paladin! *S*
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4 posted 2002-05-31 04:55 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Robert, I just love the wonderful and creative snapshots of life from your own eyes you reveal, sweet friend, these are soooooo investigative and complete, I just love your views of insight! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-05-31 04:57 PM


Bob...you are amazing!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
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6 posted 2002-05-31 05:47 PM


Pretty much right on the money...sorry for the cliche'
Yep! Right back where we started.
Nice perspective have poet will travel!

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7 posted 2002-06-01 10:23 AM


More snapshots - and again it fits well..and my morbid mood lol..

K

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